Help out a n00b's sunburst deck

[Delacroix]

I've been playing Magic for 2 weeks and I find it the best game!

I now stopped buying yugioh and started playing magic.

I bought this "Sunburst Deck" and some singles and made this deck. I never played a pro player ever but this deck wins the guys in my school.

Plz r/f it.

Total: 60

Creatures: 2

Bringer of the Black Dawn
Joiner Adept

Artifact Creatures:12

Sun Crusher
Etched Oracle
Lunar Avenger
Sawtooth Tresher x2
Suntouched Myr x3
Skyreach Manta x3

Sorcerys: 1

Channel the Suns

Artifacts: 21

Door to Nothingness
Tower of Eons
Mindslaver
Energy Chamber x2
Infused Arrows x2
Paradise Mantle
Opaline Bracers
Heliophial x2
Darksteel Ingot x3
Pentad Prism x2
Chromatic Sphere x4
Cranial Planting

Lands:
Mirrodin's Core x2
Seat of the Synod x4
Ancient Den x4
Vault of Whispers x4
Tree of Tales x4
Great Furnace x4

Plz help!

[Yurka]

I'd get more Channel the suns, Mirrodin's Core, Etched Oracle, Suntouched Myr, & Forests.

Remove the fallowing:

Door to Nothingness
Tower of Eons
Mindslaver
Opaline Bracers
Chromatic Sphere

Good luck, newbie.

[fifth_degree_bassist]

u cannt just buy a preconstructed deck and expect to win you alspo have to buy singles or packs be sure to build on ur deck but dont maake the same mistake so many noobs do dont just add cards because theyre good take out to keep it to 60-62 ull get what u want when u want it

[Yurka]

Buy singles, it's cheaper.

Speak English, fifth_degree_bassist...

[stonetheinvoker]

Even though it is nearly half the set, I think Sunburst is incredibly stupid. It reminds me of the sliver days. You should base your deck around something simple.

[Yurka]

The only reason I would run a Sunburst deck is because of the cool artwork on the cards, but yes, most simple decks tend to be more reliable.