Bao Ushio - Kora

[Sasuke Uchiha]

Please, don't read this story if you are a touchy religious person. I'm Christian and believe in God (yet open to all religions). However, this story takes a slight religious tone. It's "The Original Story" which explains how Arceus and everything else came to be. Nothing here breaks any rules.

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I do not on Pokemon, I do not know Satoshi Tajiri, nor have I asked him for permission to write about his work. This is purely fan-fiction created from my mind's mind. I admit to indulging in the series and claiming copyright issue towards Nintendo Jp. and USA. I will relinquish any rights I have to this sotry upon request.
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Readings 1:1 Arceus was born from an egg within a vortex of pure chaos.

Readings 1:2 Arceus was born. As he was born, it created two beings from itself.

Readings 1:3 Dialga of time, and Palkia of space.

Readings 1:4 Then three more beings of matter were created.

Readings 1:5 Arceus created Uzie, Mesprit, and Azelf.

Readings 1:6 Together, the 5 beings matter and spirit, while Arceus went to sleep.

Readings 1:7 Palkia, contained space within it's body in apparent vessels. As Palkis continued to take form, so did space. Then a sphere of matter was created.

Readings 1:8 As Dialga was born, time began to flow, as did a single vessel on his body. As the flow of time met with the matter of Space, a planet was created.

Readings 1:9 Palkia was first to express emotion. He was also the first to speak.

Readings 1:10 "My sibling, you have destroyed my Space."

Readings 1:11 Dialga quickly responded. Dialga could not express vocally as Palkia would.

Readings 1:12 As Dialga streched it's area of voice, as did it's sibling, nothing but destruction emmitted from the hollow sound.

Readings 1:13 Dialga did not wish to awaken Arceus, so he quickly turned his voice to the on-looking triplets.

Readings 1:14 Mesprit and Azelf fell towards the mixture of Space and Time. Mesprit looked into the spewing mixture of virgin despair and spoke as well.

Readings 1:15 "I will succed, yet I will fail. I see Time and Space as a journey of passion and hatred."

Readings 1:16 Azelf could speak as well. Azelf, seeing it's sibling sucked into the spew of Time and Space rejoiced and fallen into the vile.

Readings 1:17 "Arceus intends for me to miss sibling. But I will not see despair and hatred. I will overcome. Their is no failure if I acheive."

Readings 1:18 Uxie cried as it had seen it's two siblings fall into the despair. It turned it's view to Dialga. Yet trying to speak to it's twin sibling Palkia, it let out a roar. And another, and another. Soon, many of dozens of roars of sadness filled the chaos. It mixed well with the Space and created more sphere's of despair and hatred. Some big, some small.

Readings 1:19 Scared of what it had seen, Uxie closed it's eyes and fearlessly dropped to the spew that it's similiar siblings had fallen into.

Readings 1:20 Dialga and Palkia look onwards as it's sibling fell into the spew. Dialga tried to express itself with another, until it was interrupted.

Readings 1:21 "Enough madness. Arceus gave you to much strength, and us too little. I have lost my siblings of a set to your senseless destruction and ignorance. "

Readings 1:22 Uxie completely shut it's eyes and quickly fell to the spew. It cried many tears as it fell, one for each being he would communicate with with his knowledge. Thus, Uxie spoke again one last time.

Readings 1:23 "I will prevent conflict and frustration between those who can listen and yield. I will send to spew whoever cannot learn."

Readings 1:24 Dialga and Palkia as well followed their siblings into the spew. Lost for many of years, they cried as they had felt incomplete and responsible.

Readings 1:25 As Arceus was to wake, a large exodius of mass erupted from it's person. A giant spiral slowly descented to the Spew, leaving small bits of itself to each spew of time that Dialge had created. One larger black spew fell off as it grew a pair of mishapen limbs and glided towards the spew.



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Here's a fanfic I'm working on. I took a break from Pokemon to go Naruto and YGO! crazy the last 6 weeks. I'm hoping to get back to Loud Crime City before the summer ends and finish up ths arc. If I get enough good reviews from here, I just might do so.

[Elly]

If Kero writes it, I will read it.

[Volt1919]

Very nicely written, one of the best fanfics I've seen in a long time.

[-Airknight-]

I went away all this summer, and couldon't stay caught on with your other FanFic. The one with the trainer and his Weavile? If anyone remembers the title to that thread or will provide a link I'd be much obliged.

And this looks great as well.

Edit: Oh, nevermind. It was Loud Crime City, as mentioned in the bottom of your post.

Additional Comment:

Double Edit: There's still only 2 Chapters :[.

[Sasuke Uchiha]

Originally Posted by Elly

If Kero writes it, I will read it.

Thanks.

Originally Posted by Volt1919

Very nicely written, one of the best fanfics I've seen in a long time.

Thank you.

Originally Posted by -Airknight-

Double Edit: There's still only 2 Chapters :[.

It's one of those stories. I will continue it. There should be a chapter up soon. I just feel that I should work on other work before I continue somethign that's ongoing.

[Mr.Missingno]

Great fic,it made it seem to me that Pokemon were actually the elder beings. Waiting for pt.2!