A Burning Crusade Chapter 2 (Pokemon fic)

[Acid_Kid]

Chapter 2
Fancy Steppin


Landon and Xavier are walking through the woods. There are green diamond shells everywhere.


"Hey, Xavier." said Landon


"Yeah, Landon?" asked Xavier


"Where's the nearest gym?" asked Landon


"Oh, the nearest gym is in Deedleroot Town," replied Xavier "that's northwest of here through Yellowberg Town."


"I was just wondering," said Landon. Suddenly both guys heard a beat. 'bump bump bump bumpbumpbump huuggh' it went. It came from just West of them. "Come on let's follow that beat." They both run off west to find two combatants in a doubles battle. One of them was a black man wearing a yellow disco outfit and had a white and red afro. He had a small blue pokemon with a leaf on its head and an alligator in the shape of a guitar in front of him. The other was a kid with a yellow shirt and brown pants and a green cap. He had a pink cat and a small beaver with leaves on its head. Landon got out his pokedex. Lotad The Water Weed pokemon Despite being a primarily aquatic species, Lotad can survive on land, particularly in wetlands. It sometimes uses its six "legs" to travel on land to find new pools of water, to escape predators or overcrowding. This ability may stem from the fact that Lotad's evolutionary (evolution, not Pokémon evolution) predecessors dwelled on land, but gradually became aquatic after their leaf became too large to support.
Alliguito The Sound Reptile pokemon
This pokemon has the ability to use sight and sound waves when stalking its prey and battling.

Skitty
The Kitten Pokemon
Skitty has the habit of becoming fascinated by moving objects and chasing them around. In the wild, this Pokémon lives in holes in the trees of forests. A Skitty's adorably cute behaviour makes it highly popular. In battle, it makes its tail puff out. It threatens foes with a sharp growl. It is said to be difficult to earn its trust. However, it is extremely popular for its cute looks and behavior


Leavabeava
The Worker beaver pokemon
Instead of buidling dams, this pokemon makes a living by building nests and homes for other Pokemon.


"Lotad! Rain Dance!" said the man with the afro. Lotad danced to the beat and it started to rain.


"Skitty use attract and Leavabeava use Fury Swipes!" said the boy. Skitty upped its cuteness and looked at Lotad, but it had failed.


"Well it seems to me that we have ourselves a gender bender," said the man with the afro. The beaver pokemon ran toward Lotad and slashed it once, twice, three times. "Alliguito use bite!" The alligator pounced on Skitty and bit her. "Lotad use Water Gun!" Lotad spat a small stream of water at Skitty. Skitty fell over and her eyes were replaced with swirls. She fainted.


"Skitty return," said the boy "Leavabeava use fury swipes again" Leavabeava took a swipe at Alliguito but missed.


"Alliguito use Poison Chomp!" said the man with the afro. Alliguito built up energy and bit Leavabeava with a purple glow. Leavabeava fell over with swirls in his eyes. Landon walked closer to the man with the afro.


"That was a great battle, man," said Landon "What's your name"


"I am the great Miror B," said Miror B "and I know that was all of my battles are great because I am a superstar." Miror B began to dance to his beat.


"How about me and you battle right now?" asked Landon.


"Are you sure about this?" asked Xavier


"Absoluley," said Landon


"Okay then," said Miror B "Let's just have a one-on-one battle so Alliguito return" Alliguito went back into his pokeball.


"Alright, Riolu let's go!" yelled Landon. Landon threw a pokeball and it released Riolu.


"Lotad, Rain Dance!" Lotad danced and it rained once more.


"Riolu, Agility!" Riolu ran at breakneck speed around Lotad.


"Lotad, use absorb!" Lotad absorbed health from Riolu.


"Riolu, use Brick Break!" Riolu kicked Lotad in the face.


"Interesting." said Miror B "Lotad use Water Gun!" Lotad spat at Riolu


"Riolu use Agility to dodge it!" yelled Landon. Riolu ran at breakneck speed to dodge the water gun. "Now use Quick Attack!" Riolu maintained that speed and sped directly at Lotad, thus hitting her. Lotad fell over and her eyes turned to swirls. "Alright, I won my first battle."


"Lotad return," said Miror B "don't you think this is over Landon. I'm gonna be coming for a rematch real soon."


"I'll be ready," said Landon "but Riolu you were great out there!"


"Riolu," said Riolu Translation: I guess I was. Miror B left. Landon and Xavier left too.
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Next chapter: Team Rocket meets their next target. Plus Xavier catches a new pokemon

[animeandmangafreak]

Skitty
The Kitten Pokemon
Skitty has the habit of becoming fascinated by moving objects and chasing them around. In the wild, this Pokémon lives in holes in the trees of forests. A Skitty's adorably cute behaviour makes it highly popular. In battle, it makes its tail puff out. It threatens foes with a sharp growl. It is said to be difficult to earn its trust. However, it is extremely popular for its cute looks and behavior


Leavabeava
The Worker beaver pokemon
Instead of buidling dams, this pokemon makes a living by building nests and homes for other Pokemon.


if u wanted to put it in that format, u should have had one of the characters take out there pokedex


also i belive u need to describe the attks. for example, when u tell growlithe to do flamthrower u shouldn't say this growlithe used flamethower, u should say it like growlithe opened his mouth and fire bursted out of it or something

[Acid_Kid]

Landon did get out his pokedex and flashed it on all four of them. Also I am describing the attacks. You're just not reading it.

[animeandmangafreak]

whoops sry, i missed the landon part. and i guess im just to sucky with pokemon that i couldn't tell u were describing the attks. man my pokemon knowledge sucks

[Acid_Kid]

It's okay. Some of the pokemon aren't even real. I created Leavabeava and Alliguito myself.