The Adventures of The Duelist Army! Chapter 6: The Hero's History!

[InuYugi]

I'm too tired to copy all of the links to the rest of the story right now. I may add them later. They're all in my sig anyway. I've gotten some complaints that I don't go into enough detail with my characters. I'll work on that. Also, I'm going to try giving each character a different colour when they talk.


This chapter will delve into my past a little bit, and into my connection with Rain Storm.



Lets begin....

Stone Tablet Chamer, Castle, Shadow Realm

Me: "Ok, who did that?"

Deck Creator: "Who did what?"

Me: "Who teleported us here? Wait, I know! A wizard did it!"

I laugh, and everyone looks at Dr Strange.

Dr Strange: "What?"

Me: "Sorry. Couldn't resist."

David(disembodied voice): "HOW DARE YOU?!?! YOU DEFEATED MY LIONS AND STOLE MY MILLENIUM ROD! GIVE IT BACK NOW!!!!!!"

Scott: "Nah, I think I'll keep it, thanks!"

David: "GRRR! Thats IT! I've been taking it easy on you all for FAR TOO LONG! Now I'll step it up and release some of my stronger units!"

Freed: "I await the battle anxiously! Send out your best! We are not afraid!"

Jesse: "Yeah! You tell him Freed!" His voice quivers a little as he speaks.

David: "HAHAHAHAHA!!!! You claim you are not afraid yet that little one is shaking like a leaf!"

Deck Creator: "HEY! Leave the kid alone!"

David: "Oh, he is right to be scared! You will face soul shattering horrors AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I hope you brought extra diapers!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahahahaha....." His voice fades out.

Deck Creator: "Man, what a maniacal jack***!"

Me: "Hmph. Yeah, I've had to put up with him for a few years. In all the years I've been alive, he is the most annoying person I have ever met."

Deck Creator: "So, how old are you anyway?"

I chuckle. Me: "How old do I look?"

Deck Creator: "I don't know. About 18? 20 maybe?"

Me: "I....am 1,836 years old. 1,837 in October."

Everyone's mouth drops in shock , except for Scott, Josh(of course my best friends would know my secret by now) and Rain Storm.

Deck Creator: "No way! You don't look a day over 20! You can't be over 1000 years old!"

Me: "Immortals, such as myself, age very, very, very slowly."

Deck Creator: "You're Immortal?"

Me: "Yeah, watch!"

I draw my longsword with my right hand and pierce my left arm with it. Everyone is shocked, again!

Me: "AARGH! I forgot how much that stings!"

I pull my sword out, wipe the blood off on my pant leg and sheathe it. My arm hangs limp and blood drips from the wound.

Me: "Give it a few minutes. In the meantime, lets keep moving. Which door are we going through this time?"

Deck Creator: "Can I pick?"

"Go ahead."

Deck Creator: "Ok, how about the third door on the left?"

Me: "Ok, but from the sounds of things, I think it may get tougher from here on out. Everybody, check your equipment! Make sure you are ready for the worst!"

My clothing consists of a red T-shirt, blue pants and a green jacket. My equipment is a green backpack stuffed full of various supplies. It has a small metal panel with buttons and dials on the side. I wear a belt with deck boxes attached containing all of my decks, a sheath for my longsword tucked into the belt, a harness for my Claymore swords on my back, my shield attached to my backpack and a green cape d***** over it all. The cape is large, and drags on the floor as I walk. There are many rips and holes in it, some of which have been sewn up. It is clear that this cape has seen battle. Yet, I bear no scars. Well, except for the one on my arm.

I search through my backpack and pull out a bundle of metal held together with leather straps.

Me: "Anyone need this?"

Bluesilversword: "What is that?"

I unfold it. Me: "Its a little something I made. Its armour. All it is is several metal plates held together my leather straps. It is lightweight and won't restrict movement too much."

Dr Strange: "Can I use it?"

Me: "Sure. Wizards are notorious for having incredible magical abilities, offset by poor physical strength and defence."

I toss him the armour. He puts it on.

Dr Strange: "Yeah, that pretty much how it goes. Thanks."

Scott wears full black Ninja robes. He is completely covered from his toes up to the collar that covers the lower half of his face. His curly red hair spills over the top of the headband wrapped around his forehead. In the center of the headband there is a silver plate with a small, peculiar, vaguely leaf-like symbol on it. He has a katana sheathed at his waist on his right side. He also has the Millenium Rod tucked in on his waist.

He reaches into his robe and pulls out a second sheathed katana and sets it on his left. He also pulls out a few shurikens and examines them. He flings one across the room, and it strikes deep into the stone button that opens the next door.

Scott: "Perfect."

"Ok, everyone ready? Then lets rock!"

We head through the doorway and find ourselves in a long, dark hallway. There is the occasional torch on the wall, just barely enough to light the way. The hallway seems to slope downward slightly. As we walk along, there are many twists and turns.

Me: "Hey look!"

Everyone turns their attention to me. I grab a torch off of the wall and hold it near my arm. The wound is gone. Not a trace of it remains.

Deck Creator: "Wow! Disturbing, yet cool at the same time!"

Rain Storm: ".....Jon?"

Me: "Yeah?"

Rain Storm: "Do you remember....the first time we met?"

I stop and think about it for a moment.

Me: "...Not really. I think Bluesilversword introduced us, didn't he?"

We keep walking.

Bluesilversword: "Yeah. On MSN."

Rain Storm: "No. We met before that. Think back.... It was about 400 years ago."

400 Years Earlier, Lake Shore, Real World

Me: "Hello stranger! You alright?"

Rain Storm: "Run, Run please before he comes back…….."

Me: "What? Wait a minute whats going on?"

Blood Rain: Good Bye foolish mortal. The end is coming. I still have control over my body…..

Me: "WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!!!"

I am suddenly thrown over 500 feet into the air. Blood Rain is already gone before I hit the ground.

Me: *****After about 20 minutes of unconsciousness****** "Ouch……what the heck happened? Who was that? It seemed that I was looking at 2 different people. Could he have a Millennium Item?"

Present Day, Dark Hallway, Castle, Shadow Realm

Me: "That was you?!?!?"

Rain Storm: "Yeah. You're not mad, are you?"

I laugh. Me: "HAHAHAHA!!! Mad? Of course not! That was fun! And I appreciate a strong fighter! That was one of the strongest attacks I've ever seen! Nobody else has ever been able to KO me in a single attack! I am seriously impressed!

I shake Rain's hand.

Rain Storm: "Oh. Well, you're welcome, I think?"

I chuckle.

We keep walking. After a while, the hallway straightens out and levels out as well. Soon, it starts to ramp back up. By this time we have been walking for several minutes.

Deck Creator: "Look! I see a light at the end of the hallway!"

We all start running toward the end of the hallway. Soon, we emerge outside the castle, in a large graveyard.

Bonz: "Well, this doesn't look so bad!"

Everyone looks at Bonz.

Me: "Doesn't look bad? Its a graveyard! That is never good! How can you say... Oh, right, undead. Sorry, nevermind."

The graveyard is fenced in, and at the far end there is a stone monument. There is a relief on the wall of an angel with a bow and arrow. The arrowhead seems to be made of peridot. I reach back and hit a button on the metal panel on my backpack, and quickly unzip the top of it. Speakers on mechanical arms rise out and position themselves on my shoulder. Micheal Jackson's "Thriller" begins to play. Everyone gives me a wierd look.


Me: "HAHAHAHA!!! Sorry, I thought it was funny!

Most of them chuckle. Those who didn't had never heard the song before. Suddenly, a hand reaches out of a nearby grave. Then another from a different grave. And another. And another. Zombies and skeletons are coming out of every grave!

Me: "Uh oh. Maybe they just want to dance?"

I laugh, as do a few of the others. We stop laughing and strike battle poses. Then, as if the zombies and skeletons weren't enough, a swarm of bats comes in and they start transforming into vampires right before our eyes!

Deck Creator: "I'll handle them! HYA!!"

Deck Creator creates a large light beam, it hits most of the vampires and turns them to dust instantly. There are only a few vampires left. Rain Storm uses the power of wind to rip a coffin lid out of the ground and bring it over toward the group.

Rain Storm: "Someone help me break this up!"

Josh: "I'm on it!"

He draw his twin swords and dices the coffin lid into several stakes. Rain uses the wind to drive them into the hearts of the remaining vampires.

Me: "Nice work guys! Ok, now for the sekeletons!"

Bonz dashes to the nearest skeleton and rips of it's lower leg, causing it to fall and shatter on the ground. Bonz crushes the leg bone in his jaws.

Me: "Ha ha! Nice one, Bonz!"

Bonz turns his head towards me, barks exitedly, then turns back and stops. As we stare is shock, the shattered skeleton reforms!

Bonz: "Uh oh."

Me: "Ok, this is bad! Everyone, ATTACK!!!!"

Everyone rushes forward, slicing, striking, smashing and blasting at the creatures, but they just continue to reform! Josh creates a fireball, about the size of a baseball in his hand, and hurls it at a skeleton. The skeleton is stunned momentarily, but just keeps coming!

Josh: "Time to turn up the heat!"

He creates another fireball, and it keeps getting larger. Soon, it is the size of a beach ball, he throws this at the skeleton, and it burns to ashes.

Josh: "Oh yeah!"

He does this a few more times. He takes out several skeletons, yet he has barely made a dent in the crowd! He attempts to make another fireball, but all that appears in his hand is a puff of smoke.

Josh: "NOO! I overdid it! I need time for the fire to recharge! Can you guys cover me until then?"

Scott: "How long will it take?"

Josh: "I dunno! It will take several hours to recharge completely, but I should be able to make one good one in a few minutes!"

Scott: "You heard him! Go all out, hold these freaks back as long as you can!"

The group continues fighting, but we are vastly outnumbered. The slow moving zombies are even catching up. They are easy enough to handle, but with the skeletons as well, we are outnumbered about 100 to 1. We are surrounded and being forced back more and more. Things are looking grim.

Me: *sigh* "I didn't want to have to do this..."

I sheathe my weapons, and fall to my knees. I put my hands together, close my eyes, and bow my head. I sit in absolute silence for a few seconds. Suddenly, my eyes fly open, I rise to my feet and begin to levitate.

Me: "Evil....."

I clench my fists and cross my arms in front of me, and sort of curl up. Then I strech out and yell....

Me: "..BEGONE!!!"

And with that, an explosion of glorious golden energy spreads out from my body. My teammates and allies are healed, mentally and physically. Their strength and vigor are better than ever. But every enemy is disintegrated all at once. When the light fades. I am standing on the ground, my teammates and allies standing around me, trying to figure out what happened.

Scott: "What was that?!?!"

Me: "....In the many years I've walked this earth, I've met some very powerful friends, and learned many powerful techniques."

Josh: "So, why have we never seen that one before?"

Me: "Its a long story. I'll try to explain it later. In the meantime, lets keep moving."

We head towards the far end of the graveyard. As we aproach the monument, one last zombie climbs out of it's grave.

Dr Strange: "I got him."

Dr Strange cast a small fire spell on the zombie. It is set aflame, struggles momentarily, and quickly burns to ashes. As soon as the zombie is finished, a panel underneath the angel relief slides away, revealing a decending staircase. It is steep, and quite long.

Scott: "Is it just me, or does this seem awfully familiar?"

I nod.

Me: "Deja vu?"

We head down. When we reach the bottom, we find ourselves in a small room. As we enter the room, the Millenium Rod begins to glow. There is a furnace in the wall, and at the far end there is a pedestal with an indentation about the size of a book. Above it, a coffin is hung from the celing with a chain at each corner.

Scott: "Ok, now I know this is familiar."

Me: "Yeah, this is weird. Anyway, we should probably get that coffin down.

Josh: "Yeah, but how're we gonna do it?"

?????: "Don't bother."

One of the chains on the bottom end of the coffin snaps.

Deck Creator: "What was that?"

The other bottom chain snaps. The coffin swings down and blood spills out of the crack. It continues to drip as the coffin hangs there. We hear a creepy evil laughter.

?????: "Why, its only your worst nightmares come to life! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!"

The voice seems to be coming from all around us.

Me: "Show yourself!"

As I say that, the last 2 chains holding the coffin snap, and it falls to the ground. It stands on end.

Scott: "Should we open it?"

Me: "Probably."

I take a step toward the coffin. Without warning, the lid flies off at me. I smash it and send it off to the side. I look into the coffin, and I see him. Standing there, eyes closed, arms folded across his chest, the Millenium Scales in his hand. Vampire Lord. The scales are tilted heavily to one side. He opens his eyes and, without changing his posture, levitates forward out of the coffin and lands a few feet in front of it.

Vampire Lord: "Ha ha ha ha! Who shall be my first victim?"

Me: "One moment please."

I turn back to the group. I motion for them to huddle around.

Me: "Ok, who wants him? Remember, this may be difficult."

Zturchan: "I'll take him."

Me: "You sure?"

Zturchan: "Yeah. Think about it, zombies and skeletons and werewolves and such have a habit of not staying dead, right?"

Me: "Yeah."

Zturchan: "So, if we're worried about them not wanting to stay in their graves...."

He holds up his Macro Madness deck.

Zturchan: "....Lets not let them hit the grave!"

Me: "Ok, go for it man! Good luck!"

Vampire Lord: "I grow impatient, Are you ready?"

Zturchan: "Yeah, I'm gonna take you out!"


Vampire Lord releases his grip on the Millenium Scales and it flies over and sets down directly in between Zturchan and Vampire Lord. The scales are perfectly balanced. They ready their Duel Disks.

Vampire Lord: "Ha ha ha! I will steal your blood and your soul!

Zturchan: "Lets duel!"

(Zturchan: 8000/ Vampire Lord: 8000)

Zturchan: "I'll start! I draw my 6 cards, and I'll summon D. D. Survivor in attack mode(1800 ATK/ 200 DEF)! Then, I'll set 2 cards face down! Your turn!"

Vampire Lord: "I draw my cards. Hmm..... I think I'll just have to set one monster in defence mode for now... I end--"

Zturchan: "Hold it right there! I activate my trap card, Macro Cosmos! First, this lets me special summon Helios - The Primordial Sun from my deck in defence mode(0 ATK/0 DEF)! And as long as my trap remains on the field, all cards that would be sent to the graveyard are removed from the game instead!"

Vampire Lord: "Fine. I'll set one card face down. I end my turn."

Zturchan: "Ok, I draw. Perfect! I'll offer my D. D. Survivor to summon my Majestic - Mech Goryu in attack mode(2900 ATK/1800 DEF)! First, because of Macro Cosmos, my Survivor is removed from the game instead of being sent to the grave. This means that he will come back at the end of my turn.(Helios gains 100 ATK.) Second, since I only tributed one monster for my Goryu, he will die at the end of the turn. However, thanks to his Peircing Battle Damage ability, one turn is all it will take to rack up some nice damage! Majestic Mech - Goryu, attack his face down monster!"

Vampire Lord: "Hah! You can't destroy my Spirit Reaper(300 DEF/200 DEF) that easily!"

Zturchan: "I don't even need to destroy it! This is gonna hurt!"

(Zturchan: 8000/Vampire Lord: 5300)

The scales tip towards Zturchan.

Vampire Lord: "ARGH! You will suffer for that!"

Zturchan: "Ha ha ha! Alright, I'll set one more card face down, and then I'll end my turn, meaning that Goryu goes away and D. D. Survivor comes back out to play!"

Vampire Lord: "I draw. Yes, this will do nicely! I'll activate my spell card Call of the Mummy! I'll use it's effect to special summon myself to the field!(2000 ATK/1500 DEF)"

Zturchan: "Alright, I'll activate another trap! Ring of Destruction!"

The card flips up, and a brown ring with several grenades attached comes out of it. The card disappears. The ring begins spinning and flies over to Vampire Lord. At the last second, a large golden, Egyptian looking mask appears on Vampire Lord. The ring is repeled and destroyed. Th mask disappears.

Zturchan: "What was that?"

Vampire Lord: "I activated my trap card, Tutan Mask. It protects my Zombies from your spells and traps that target, such as your ring!"

Zturchan: "Fair enough."

Vampire Lord: "Now, I'll normal summon Vampire Lady(1550 ATK/1550 DEF) in attack mode! Then, I'll switch my Spirit Reaper into attack position."

Zturchan: "Thats ok, I'll activate my last face down card, Grand Convergance! This destroys every monster on the field, and because of Macrocosmos, removes them from play, and as an added bonus, it inflicts 300 damage to you!"

(Zturchan: 8000/ Vampire Lord: 5000)

The scales tip slighly more.

Zturchan: "But, of course, my Survivor will return at the end of the turn!"

Vampire Lord: "And I will return to battle at the begginning of my next turn!"

Zturchan: "I think not! You see, you would have to be in the graveyard for that to work!"

Vampire Lord: "WHAT?!?!? NO!!"

He quickly regains his composure.

Vamire Lord: "Hmph. I suppose I'll just have to work around that little setback and make you suffer even more! I'll end my turn!"

Zturchan: "My Survivor returns, and then I draw. I'll tribute my Survivor for Golden Homunculus(3000 ATK/1500 DEF)! It starts out with a mere 1500 attack power, definitly not worth a Tribute, but it gains 300 attack points for every one of my cards that are removed from the game! 5 cards means 1500 more attack power!"

The giant golden creature appears, and when Zturchan mentions his attack boost, he doubles in size!

Zturchan: "Now, my Homunculus, attack him directly!"

Vampire Lord: "AAAAGH!!"

(Zturchan: 8000/Vampire Lord: 2000)

The scales tip much further.

Zturchan: "D. D. Survivor comes back(Golden Homunculus loses 300 ATK), and I end my turn."

Vampire Lord: *I can't lose! I must destroy this worthless mortal!* "I'll use my Call of the Mummy to special summon my Ryu Kokki in defence mode(2400 ATK/ 2000 DEF)! I end my turn."

The hideous creature rises. It seems to be made from the skulls of many other creatures combined.

Zturchan: "I draw. Hmmm. I'll attack your Ryu Kokki with my Golden Homunculus!"

The Golden giant punches the horrific creature. As it dies, the creature roars, and the Homunculus falls as well.

Vampire Lord: "HAHAHAHA!! When my Ryu Kokki battles with a Warrior or Spellcaster, that monster is destroyed as well!"

Zturchan: "Well, thats ok. I've still got D. D. Survivor to attack you directly!"

(Zturchan: 8000/Vampire Lord: 200)

The scales tip almost completely.

Zturchan: "I'll set one card face down, and I'll end my turn."

Vampire Lord: I draw. HA HA HA HA HA!!! Excellent!!! Now you shall see the true master of Vampires! I'll use Call of the Mummy to special summon a second Vampire Lord(2000 ATK/ 1500 DEF), then tribute it for Vampire Genesis(3000 ATK/2100 DEF)!!"

He walks into his spot on the field, and then a purple mist surrounds him. He begins to mutate and grow. Soon he is ducking to avoid hitting the roof. He is a huge, grotesque evil being of darkness. The kind of thing you would expect to find in your worst nightmares.

Vampire Genesis: "AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHA!!! NOW FEEL MY TRUE POWER!!"

He draws back his arm and slashes D. D. Survivor to pieces. His claws reach even farther and scratch Zturchan.

Zturchan: "AAAAGH!"

Me: "Hey, are you alright?"

He staggers to his feet.

Zturchan: "Yeah. I'll be fine. Man, those claws hurt!"

(Zturchan: 6800/Vampire Genesis: 200)

The scales rebalance slightly.

Vampire Genesis: "HAHAHAHA!! I end my turn! Draw whatever you like! I know for certain nothing in your deck can match my power!"

Zturchan: "Ok, my D. D. Survivor comes back, and with a little bit of faith in the Heart of the Cards....."

He pauses and closes his eyes for a moment.

Vampire Genesis: "GET ON WITH IT!!"

Zturchan: "Ok, I draw! PERFECT!! I'll summon My D. D. Warrior Lady in attack position!"

Vampire Genesis: "That puny wimp can't defeat ME!"

Zturchan: "You should know by know, attack points aren't everything! If my D. D. Warrior Lady battles, win or lose, she can take both herself and the opponent and remove them from the game! D. D. Warrior Lady, attack Vampire Genesis!"

Vampire Genesis: "NO!!!!"

(Zturchan: 5300/ Vampire Genesis: 200)

The scales balance out a little more.

The Warrior Lady disappears and Vampire Genesis is knocked back to his original spot.

Zturchan: "Now, just for the fun of it, I'll activate my face down card, Return from the Different Dimension! At the cost of half of my life points, I can bring back a bunch of my monsters that have been removed from play! I'll bring back D. D. Warrior Lady, Majestic Mech - Goryu, Golden Homunculus and Helios - The Primordial sun! Those four, along with my D. D. Survivor, all attack you directly!"

Vampire Genesis: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

(Zturchan: 3400/Vampire Genesis: -8500*I think*)

The scales fall over towards Zturchan. Zturchan walks over and picks them up. As he holds it in front of him, the scales tip about halfway to the right. The scales begin to glow brightly and Zturchan holds completely still for a moment. During this time, all of the knowledge and power of the Scales enters his mind. It is a lot easier to take as it has not caused the same amout of suffering as the Rod. When it is fiished, he starts to fall over, but quickly regains his balance.

Zturchan: "I believe this is mine now."

Vampire Genesis falls to his knees.

Vampire Genesis: "I......can't.....lose....."

He fades away.

The crowd cheers and hollers as Zturchan walks back over to us.

Me: "Excellent work, General!"

Josh: "Nice, man, nice!!"

Scott: "Good job! You kicked the snot out of him!"

Zturchan: "Thanks! It was surprisingly easy! I guess thats because taking away the graveyard really cripples Vampire Lord. Thats like the Yu-Gi-Oh! equivelant of taking a shotgun to his legs or something."

Me: "Hey, why are the scales tilted like that?"

Zturchan: "Oh, thats because it tells the balance of one's soul. If it tilts to my right, thats good, to the left is evil. As you can see, it is tilting about 3/4ths of the way to my right. That is because, like most people, I am a good person, but not quite pure of heart. I mean, we've all got a little darkness in us, right?"

Scott: "Yeah, I suppose."

Bluesilversword: "Makes sence."

Josh: "Hey, you can check other people with that, right? How about checking us out?"

Zturchan: "Ok."

He holds the Scales out to Scott. The balance is about the same as Zturchan's.

Scott: "Cool!"

He holds it to Josh. It is leaning to the right, but not quite as far as the Zturchan or Scott.

Josh: "What? Oh."

Everybody looks at Josh.

Josh: "Well, lets just say I'm not exactly a goody-two-shoes."

Zturchan: ".....Moving on."

He hold it up to Bluesilversword. The scales are in perfect balance. Everyone looks at Bluesilversword, surprised.

Bluesilversword: "Wow. I knew that me and PlatinumArcher balanced eachother out, but I had no idea it was so perfect. I know there is some darkness in me, so I guess that means that he has some good in him as well. Interesting."

He holds the scale up to me. The scales tip all the way to the right. It seems like it is about to break off. Zturchan pulls the Scales back, worried that it may. Everyone looks at me.

Zturchan: ".....Does this have anything to do with that blast earlier?"

Me: "Yes. You see, once, several hundred years ago, I was given the chance to gain the power of angels. But, to attain this power, I had to become 100%, completely, beyond a shadow of a doubt, pure of heart. I meditated for 100 years straight in absolute solitude. No light, no food, no water, nothing. After 100 years, I was finally able to force out the darkness within me. Literally. I split into 2 minds, 2 bodies. Each pure of heart. One was kind and noble, the other vile and evil."

Jesse: "You're a great fighter, why didn't you just take him out right then and there?"

I chuckle.

Me: "As much as I would have liked to, I couldn't. Even now, I don't know if I could defeat him. In theory, we would have equal in power, but being evil, he was also ruthless. He would not hold back, where I would in fear of hurting someone nearby. Also, I am bound to him. I am him, and he is me. If I die, he will as well. If he dies, I die. Anyway, he escaped and went crazy. He started killing random people for no reason, and destroying everything in sight. I ran back to gain the Angelic abilities right away. I gained power like nothing I had ever seen or felt before. I gained Holy strength. It was amazing. It is so powerful, I try to avoid using it at all costs. Well, then I hurried back, and long story short, big climactic battle, I sealed him away in another dimension. He is still there now. I know he is gathering his power, waiting for his chance to escape. That is why I train so hard. I have to be ready for him. Well, I've rambled on long enough. Perhaps I'll explain the rest of the story another day."

That same glowing light begins.

Me: "Wow, good timing or what?"

We are teleported back to the Stone Tablet Chamber....

End of chapter 6! Finally finished! What do you think?

[Swmystery]

Intriguing. Very intriguing, though it doesn't take a genius to guess where this is heading...good work nonetheless.

[scott112]

juss brilliant I loved the 6th chapter but not as much as the 5th but it is a very well done chapter

[InuYugi]

Thanks guys! Glad you liked it!

By the way, Swm, this is about all that will be shown about my "split personality" for now. I'm saving the rest of that for another story after this one. This was basically a preview of that story and a little bit of background info on me.

[bluesilversword]

That was the most colourful thing I have ever seen on Pojo ever. I liked how my evil balanced my good that perfectly describes my dark and good sides, Excellent works

[InuYugi]

Thank you !!

[Cloud19]

When will I get to duel, Im really looking forward to it...BTW, when i talk, can my color be this (DeepSkyBlue)?

[InuYugi]

Well, you are General White, and I think General Sky Blue is also in here. Yeah, thats Shining Lapras. So it might get confusing. As for your duel, I'm not quite sure yet. It will either be in Chapter 7, 8 or 9.

[zturchan]

Okay time for me to play mr. Judge, lol.

1. If spirit Reaper was face up, CotM could not activate because there was a monster on the controllers field

2. Helios-TPS gains only 100 ATK/DEF for every monster rfged And DDS was the only one right?)

Anyway, awesome, like my reasoning with how to get them to stay dead, by not putting them in their graves, thats so like me . COnincidently, you also face a Zombie Deck in my fic lol

[InuYugi]

1. I didn't realise that he wasn't allowed to have another monster, I thought it was just once per turn. (And bad guys cheat anyway:P!)

2. Oops! lol! Fixed!

Additional Comment:
By the way, zturchan, your sig links to our first team thread. When you get the chance, update it to the new one, ok?

[AdmiralCrimson(josh)]

hey ppl this is josh,jonny i like the story keep it up,ok also i say WOOOOOOOOO-GAAAAAAAAAAAA-BOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

[InuYugi]

Wee man! Good to see you! You need to post on here more often! Anyway, glad you liked it.

If anyone else is upset that they have a small role, I apologize. There are 16 of us travelling, plus bad guys, plus Lianne, and its hard to give everyone an equal part. Its easier if I really know the person I am writing about, like Scott or Josh, but as for others, like most of Pink Krush for example, I'm kinda lost. Anyway, I'll probably start on chapter 7 soon. It will have either Nick, Bluesilversword or Dr. Strange duel.

Also, I could use a few more ideas for enemies. I'm thinking of using Lord of D., and maybe Terrorking Archfiend(as suggested by Bluesilversword).

[Swmystery]

Maybe Machine King or Perfect Machine King? Or perhaps one of the Dark Magician family could take to the stage...

[Cloud19]

Originally Posted by InuYugi

Well, you are General White, and I think General Sky Blue is also in here. Yeah, thats Shining Lapras. So it might get confusing. As for your duel, I'm not quite sure yet. It will either be in Chapter 7, 8 or 9.

But white looks like the color of normal type, you'd have to bold it or something. BTW, pick me to duel next!!!!!

[InuYugi]

Swm: Thanks, those are good idea! Or I might try Robotic Knight(a servant to the Machine King). Actually, I do have one other opponent planned, but I don't want to spoil the surprise.


Nick: Fair enough. I'll put it in bold or italics or something. By the way, what deck did you want to use again?

[Cloud19]

Originally Posted by InuYugi

Nick: Fair enough. I'll put it in bold or italics or something. By the way, what deck did you want to use again?

My Bubonic Plague deck, link's in my sig.

[InuYugi]

Hmmmm..... I am a big fan of theme decks. Would it be alright if I used the Alien deck instead?

Additional Comment:
Minor edits. Mostly spelling corrections.

[Swmystery]

You mean you don't proof read your stuff before you post it? Shame on you! .

[InuYugi]

I don't even write it out ahead of time! I just think of a few ideas, and when I have time I sit down and type it up, filling in the blanks as I go! Pojo sees the full chapter only moments after I do!

[teen_kidd]

good job that was real good

[InuYugi]

Thank you! Did you read the other chapters as well?

[Cloud19]

Originally Posted by InuYugi

Hmmmm..... I am a big fan of theme decks. Would it be alright if I used the Alien deck instead?

Could you keep the RatBox instead of the Alien. You can make me lose with it if you feel like it, but the RatBox is my signature deck. I've been using it for the past 3-4 formats.

[InuYugi]

I try to write exiting duels full of theme specific special moves and amazing combos. It will be a little harder to do with that type of deck, but I'll see what I can do. I see you are very attached to that deck, so I will use it. And just so you know, your choice of deck won't change the outcome of the battle... Remember, I said 1 of the good guys will lose.

[teen_kidd]

Originally Posted by InuYugi

Thank you! Did you read the other chapters as well?

na not yet only 1-4 chapters

[InuYugi]

Ok. The prologue explains a bit of David's story, and Chapter 3.5 was written by Rain Storm, not me.