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MonkeyMasterTao9
02-16-2004, 06:58 AM
Guys, here's the next chapter to Revival of the PEgasuses. If you're new, go to http://www.pojo.biz/board/showthread.php?t=7222 and read the 1st chapter. This is the 2nd. Please give me advice and stuff then I'll improve my writing. Thanks!!!

Chapter 2 New Students

Cecelia ran to Domino High disguised as a blonde haired schoolgirl. Then the bell rang and all the students were in their seat.
“Hello, class. Today we have four new students coming to class. They are Rocky Nis, Catera Nis, Kris Nis, and Celine Million.”
“Hi!” a lot of kids shouted, but Yugi sensed something weird about one of them.
After class, they went out and had lunch. But today the teacher gave them and extended 30 minutes so they could meet the new students.
Serenity, Tea, Mai, and Catera became good friends right away, but Celine went with a crowd full of bullies. Rocky seemed to hang around Tristan and Duke a lot.
While Yugi and Joey were eating lunch, Kris walked up to them and said, “Hello. I am Kris Nis. I would like to duel you.”
Yugi and Joey were shocked.
“How did he know we were duelists?” he said to the pharaoh.
“Maybe he sensed something, you never know,” Yami replied back to him.
“Well, can we trust him?”
“Maybe. But be on your guard,” Yami said.
“Okay.”
Then Yugi opened his eyes and Joey and Kris were in a duel. Joey had his Insect Queen in defense. It was Kris’s turn.
“I summon UFO Turtle in defense and play a trap card!”
Joey drew a card, and then ZOOM! A Butterfly Dagger – Elma card gave Joey’s finger a sharp paper cut.
“What the heck?!”
Then Catera, Mai, and the other two were standing there with dark green eyes.
“Give us your deck!” cried Mai.
“Now or else,” Tea said.
“If you don’t you may never see again,” Serenity stated.
“Give the decks NOW!!!” Catera yelled, and pressed a button on her watch. A power ring came out and she set a defense card.
“But we’re dueling, sis!” Kris said.
“Oh, well. You end your turn,” Catera said with a monotone. She tributed her monster for a Fairy King Trusdale.
“ATTACK!” she screamed and her king attacked Joey directly.
“What the heck is going on?” the teacher asked and then Tea said, “Go away.”
The teacher left and then Kris said, “Catera, something’s wrong with you.”
Catera’s reply was, “Mai. Get your power ring out.”
Mai did and she summoned a Cyber Harpie in attack mode and attacked Kris.
“Serenity. Tea. Do the same,” Mai said to them and Tea attacked Joey with a Gemini Elf. Serenity attacked Kris with Dunames Dark Witch.
Joey’s LP was 3900 while Kris had 4400. They didn’t know what to do.
“Stop this now!” Rocky yelled and used his Beta to attack Catera. Tristan summoned a Bazoo the Soul-Eater and attacked Mai. Duke summoned a La Jinn and attacked Tea. Then Kaiba came along.
“What is the meaning of this?” he asked, then summoned Lord of D. and used the Flute of Summoning Dragons. He special summoned 3 Blue Eyes and a card nobody had seen before: Grizald the Cursed Dragon. Grizald had 3200/300 stats and Yugi automatically knew that Grizald had an effect.
Yugi had to join this duel, so he ran back to his grandpa’s shop, trying to find this power ring.
“Grandpa!” Yugi yelled, but when he got in there, no one was there, in fact NOTHING was there.
“What is the meaning of this?” Yugi yelled.
“Well, maybe, Yugi, you must leave and give up your deck NOW!!!”
“Grandpa?”
“Give me you deck!”
Yugi quickly ran away and then encountered his friends and the girls. They were all down to 300 LP.
Then Celine and her goons attacked them with Cannon Soldiers, Catapult Turtles, and Fire Princesses!
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!” Yugi yelled. All his friends could have died. Then, BOOM!

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

Dark Magician 005
02-28-2004, 05:14 AM
what? dosen't make that much sense.....

MonkeyMasterTao9
02-28-2004, 02:03 PM
what? dosen't make that much sense.....

How does it NOT make sense? It's perfectly fine to me . . .

Mystic Reaper
02-29-2004, 05:35 AM
You are not the reader who is reading this and thinking "mai doesnt go to school, shes a 21 year old table dancer"

Possum_the_Furry_Monarch
02-29-2004, 07:25 PM
Wow,that made no sense at all. :confused: The story was good up till the part where it started. :D

MonkeyMasterTao9
03-04-2004, 04:24 PM
What do you not get? This is fan fiction, you know!