Pokemon Prodigy
08-13-2004, 07:10 AM
This is my first Yugioh fic so bear with me. I also use a lot of street talk and stuff, so try and decipher what I mean, if you can(I.E. Mofo=Mother ****** But if I actually type out ) I don't know what else to say so, here it is..
Chapter 1: DUEL THIS, FOOL!!!
"Yo, beatdown sucks! And so do you! I see you all the time, your little wannabe-*** sayin' you can prove to anyone that you're the better duelist. Well, you done said that to the wrong person, mofo."
"You think so? Then prove it, boy. Let's go right now," challenged a brown-haired, green-eyed teenager (13 1/2 to be exact).
It was a warm, sunny day at Humbolt Park, where there was a Duel Monsters tournament taking place near the big pond in the middle of the 20 mile area park. Contestants were conducting friendly duels on the cool, evenly-cut, green grass, while offical tournament duels were ensuing on set up wooden tables and benches. It was already the Semi-Finals of the 4th largest Duel Monsters tournament ever to take place in Chicago, and they sure did pick the right time and day.
While near the table where the last Duel to decide who will go on to the Finals, was full of sparks of anger. 30 or so people crowded over the area where one of the best duels of the tournament was going to start.
"Forget it. No more talking. Let's just get it over with punk. 8000 life points each, obviously. All the official rules and whatnot," explained the tall, dark-skinned teenager.
Both of the Duelists put their decks down and before they were going to draw, the brown-haired duelist suggested, "To make things more tense, and to prove how much better at dueling you are than me, the minner will get to select one card from the losers deck.Any."
The dark-skinned duelist's eyes lit up at the very thought.
The brown-haired duelist extended his hand, and his opponent reluctantly shook it. "My name's Daniel,, by the way," the brown-haired teenager said
"I'm Tyrone. Let's just get this over with so I can thin out your deck."
Daniel just chuckled, "Let the better man win. Then again, I'm the only man here, so why not just give up now?
Tyrone growled and drew his opening five card hand. Daniel did the same.
"Aight, I draw," Tyrone scanned his hand and sneered with glee. "I'll summon Vorse Raider in attack mode (4*, Atk/1900 Def/600) and I'll set these five cards on the m/t zone. I end turn, and your dueling career."
"Okaaaay.... I activate Pot of Greed, which allows me to draw 2 new cards," Daniel explained. He looked at his hand: Premature Burial, United We Stand, Summoned Skull, Monster Reborn, Goblin Attack Force, Jinzo, and Gracful Charity. "I activate Graceful Chairity! I draw three, and discard two," he explained. Daniel drew Raigeki, Harpie's Feather Duster, and Sinister Serpent. "I discard Summoned Skull and Jinzo!"
Tyrone looked puzzled. "Why would you discard great monsters like those?"
Daniel cracked a smile, "You'll find out. Now, I activate Harpie's Feather Duster!"
He destroyed a Magical Cylinder, Mirror Force, Mystical Space Typhhon, Scapegoat, and Torrential Tribute.
"Damn!" Tyrone muttered under his breath.
"And now I activate Raigeki! Bye, bye, Vorse!" Daniel laughed.
Tyrone, a little louder this time, "DOUBLE DAMN!"
"Oh, it gets worse," Daniel cooed. "I summon Goblin Attack Force, in attack mode!(Attack/2300 Def/0) Now, I use Monster Reborn on Jinzo, and Premature Burial on Summoned Skull!"
Daniel:7200 Tyrone:8000
Tyrone groaned, "Oh, no. after all that work to get here, I, I,......"
"Never pick on another duelist. This game's about fun. And I'm gonna have fun teaching you your lesson and scarring you rude ways. All. In. My. First. Turn." Daniel stated clearly for the whole audiance to hear.
"I activate and equip United We Stand to Jinzo, it's attack now raised to 4800! Now, Goblin Attack Force, attack Directly! (Daniel:7200 Tyrone:5700)
Ya, feel the burn yet? Well, now I use Summoned Skull to attack your lifepoints directly!(Daniel:7200 Tyrone:3200) And now, my favorite monster. Jinzo! Finish off his LifePoints and your gone! Bye! See ya next tournament! Wait..." Daniel paused.
Tyrone sighed. With his head down, he mumbled, "Take what card you want."
Daniel did do so, and he exchanged his Summoned Skull for his newly aquired Blowback Dragon into his deck. And he walked toward the stage where the Finals would begin.
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So what did you think? I know it was real short, but aside from that, tell me your suggestion, comments, whatever.
Chapter 1: DUEL THIS, FOOL!!!
"Yo, beatdown sucks! And so do you! I see you all the time, your little wannabe-*** sayin' you can prove to anyone that you're the better duelist. Well, you done said that to the wrong person, mofo."
"You think so? Then prove it, boy. Let's go right now," challenged a brown-haired, green-eyed teenager (13 1/2 to be exact).
It was a warm, sunny day at Humbolt Park, where there was a Duel Monsters tournament taking place near the big pond in the middle of the 20 mile area park. Contestants were conducting friendly duels on the cool, evenly-cut, green grass, while offical tournament duels were ensuing on set up wooden tables and benches. It was already the Semi-Finals of the 4th largest Duel Monsters tournament ever to take place in Chicago, and they sure did pick the right time and day.
While near the table where the last Duel to decide who will go on to the Finals, was full of sparks of anger. 30 or so people crowded over the area where one of the best duels of the tournament was going to start.
"Forget it. No more talking. Let's just get it over with punk. 8000 life points each, obviously. All the official rules and whatnot," explained the tall, dark-skinned teenager.
Both of the Duelists put their decks down and before they were going to draw, the brown-haired duelist suggested, "To make things more tense, and to prove how much better at dueling you are than me, the minner will get to select one card from the losers deck.Any."
The dark-skinned duelist's eyes lit up at the very thought.
The brown-haired duelist extended his hand, and his opponent reluctantly shook it. "My name's Daniel,, by the way," the brown-haired teenager said
"I'm Tyrone. Let's just get this over with so I can thin out your deck."
Daniel just chuckled, "Let the better man win. Then again, I'm the only man here, so why not just give up now?
Tyrone growled and drew his opening five card hand. Daniel did the same.
"Aight, I draw," Tyrone scanned his hand and sneered with glee. "I'll summon Vorse Raider in attack mode (4*, Atk/1900 Def/600) and I'll set these five cards on the m/t zone. I end turn, and your dueling career."
"Okaaaay.... I activate Pot of Greed, which allows me to draw 2 new cards," Daniel explained. He looked at his hand: Premature Burial, United We Stand, Summoned Skull, Monster Reborn, Goblin Attack Force, Jinzo, and Gracful Charity. "I activate Graceful Chairity! I draw three, and discard two," he explained. Daniel drew Raigeki, Harpie's Feather Duster, and Sinister Serpent. "I discard Summoned Skull and Jinzo!"
Tyrone looked puzzled. "Why would you discard great monsters like those?"
Daniel cracked a smile, "You'll find out. Now, I activate Harpie's Feather Duster!"
He destroyed a Magical Cylinder, Mirror Force, Mystical Space Typhhon, Scapegoat, and Torrential Tribute.
"Damn!" Tyrone muttered under his breath.
"And now I activate Raigeki! Bye, bye, Vorse!" Daniel laughed.
Tyrone, a little louder this time, "DOUBLE DAMN!"
"Oh, it gets worse," Daniel cooed. "I summon Goblin Attack Force, in attack mode!(Attack/2300 Def/0) Now, I use Monster Reborn on Jinzo, and Premature Burial on Summoned Skull!"
Daniel:7200 Tyrone:8000
Tyrone groaned, "Oh, no. after all that work to get here, I, I,......"
"Never pick on another duelist. This game's about fun. And I'm gonna have fun teaching you your lesson and scarring you rude ways. All. In. My. First. Turn." Daniel stated clearly for the whole audiance to hear.
"I activate and equip United We Stand to Jinzo, it's attack now raised to 4800! Now, Goblin Attack Force, attack Directly! (Daniel:7200 Tyrone:5700)
Ya, feel the burn yet? Well, now I use Summoned Skull to attack your lifepoints directly!(Daniel:7200 Tyrone:3200) And now, my favorite monster. Jinzo! Finish off his LifePoints and your gone! Bye! See ya next tournament! Wait..." Daniel paused.
Tyrone sighed. With his head down, he mumbled, "Take what card you want."
Daniel did do so, and he exchanged his Summoned Skull for his newly aquired Blowback Dragon into his deck. And he walked toward the stage where the Finals would begin.
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So what did you think? I know it was real short, but aside from that, tell me your suggestion, comments, whatever.