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Zetsubou Student
11-12-2007, 11:23 AM
I walked into the stadium. It was the first day of the Sinnoh Pokemon League and I would be fighting a man named Ithilien. Little was known about this man and the Pokemon he carried, however, I was sure that I could win.... as long as Cynthia didn't trade him her Garchomp.

I approached the platform where the battle would take place. My opponent was yet to be seen. Suddenly, a huge shadow swept over the stadium and my opponent descended, riding on the back of a Salamence. He took his place opposite of me, his Salamence roaring, waiting for me to send out my first Pokemon.

My (Shinji's) Team:
1.Weavile
2.Torterra
3. Electivire
4. Honckrow
5. Ursaring
6. Azumarill

Ithilien's Team:
1. Salamence
2. Bronzong
3. Empoleon
4. Gengar
5. Tyranitar
6. Meganium

The referee waved hiss flags, signaling the beginning of the battle!

.Shinji sent out Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Ithilien sent out Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Salamence's intimidate cut Weavile's attack!
Ithilien switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Weavile used Ice Punch.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 24% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

I sent out Weavile and ordered it to perform an Ice Punch attack! However, Ithilien was indeed a talented trainer and predicted my move, switching to Bronzong so he could absorb the hit.

.Shinji switched in Torterra (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Torterra fell asleep!
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

I didn't want Weavile to be Gyro Balled so I switched to Torterra. Immediately I cursed myself! I should've switched to my Ursaring instead, knowing that the chances of Bronzong using Hypnosis were high. My Ursaring is a Sleep Talk variant with Guts and thus, would've been able to inflict a fair amount of damage against his team.

Torterra is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

Torterra is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

It was too late to change my mind so I let him set up Stealth Rock and Reflect while Torterra slept. It put me at a disadvantage, but I knew I could overcome it.

.Shinji switched in Azumarill (lvl 100 Azumarill ?).
Pointed stones dug into Azumarill.
Azumarill lost 12% of its health.
Ithilien switched in Empoleon (lvl 100 Empoleon ?).

There wasn't much more he could set up so I decided to switch into my Azumarill. Most of you are probably thinking how I obtained this Pokemon, since I had given it to some brat after it lost to Geodude, well...-series of Empoleon noises-. See?

Azumarill is tightening its focus!
Ithilien switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Azumarill used Focus Punch.
It doesn't affect Gengar...

He predicted my Focus Punch and switched to Gengar. He couldn't use Hypnosis, so I predicted that he'd use Shadow Ball. I didn't think he'd risk Thunderbolting into my Electivire this early in the game, since it was pretty obvious I ran a Shinji/Paul-themed team.

.Shinji switched in Honchkrow (lvl 100 Honchkrow ?).
Pointed stones dug into Honchkrow.
Honchkrow lost 25% of its health.
Gengar used Shadow Ball.
It's not very effective...
Honchkrow lost 35% of its health.

"Honchkrow, stand by!" I commanded as I released my Pokemon. Honchkrow got pelted by stones and a Shadow Ball as he tried to take flight. My opponent looked a little uneasy. Now he can either try to Shadow Ball again and get hit by Sucker Punch or switch and get Pursuited.

Honchkrow used Pursuit.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 100% of its health.
Ithilien's Gengar fainted.
Honchkrow lost 10% of its health.

6 VS 5 (Shinji)

He switched and got Pursuited. Gengar is no longer a problem.

Ithilien switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Tyranitar used Pursuit.
It's not very effective...
Honchkrow lost 30% of its health.
.Shinji's Honchkrow fainted.
Tyranitar's reflect wore off!
The sandstorm rages.

5 VS 5

My opponent laughed as he returned Gengar and sent out his next Pokemon. My Honchkrow became nervous as the giant Tyranitar cast it's shadow over the field. I probably should've Sucker Punched since with only 30% Honchkrow would not be able to switch in safely anymore.

.Shinji switched in Torterra (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
Pointed stones dug into Torterra.
Torterra lost 6% of its health.
Ithilien switched in Empoleon (lvl 100 Empoleon ?).
Torterra woke up!
Torterra used Leech Seed.
Empoleon was seeded!
The sandstorm rages.
Empoleon's health was sapped by leech seed!
Empoleon lost 12% of its health.
Torterra regained health!
Torterra restored 10% of its health.

About time my Torterra woke up. I was able to land a Leech Seeed too, which would help Azumarill return. I also noticed that Ithilien's Empoleon did not have Leftovers. It was either a Choice Specs or Choice Scarf variant, I was leaning towards Scarf.

.Shinji switched in Azumarill (lvl 100 Azumarill ?).
Pointed stones dug into Azumarill.
Azumarill lost 12% of its health.
Empoleon used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Azumarill lost 27% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Azumarill is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Azumarill lost 6% of its health.
Empoleon's health was sapped by leech seed!
Empoleon lost 12% of its health.
Azumarill regained health!
Azumarill restored 10% of its health.

Switching in costs Azumarill a lot of HP, however, now that I can put some hurt on my opponent's Pokemon. I prepared a Focus Punch...

Azumarill is tightening its focus!
Ithilien switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Azumarill's attack!
Azumarill used Focus Punch.
It's not very effective...
Salamence lost 41% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Salamence is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Salamence lost 6% of its health.
Azumarill is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Azumarill lost 6% of its health.

... but my opponent switched to his Salamence to absorb the attack! Fortunately for me it still did a fair amount of damage. I still had no idea what kind of Salamence it was so I decided to make a sacrifice. I didn't want to get rid of Azumarill just yet, especially since it posed a threat to Tyranitar and Salamence with Waterfall and Ice Punch.

tricky4u has entered the room.
.Shinji switched in Ursaring (lvl 100 Ursaring ?).
Pointed stones dug into Ursaring.
Ursaring lost 12% of its health.
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Ursaring lost 109% of its health.
.Shinji's Ursaring fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Salamence is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Salamence lost 6% of its health.

4 VS 5 (Ithilien)

"Useless," I sighed as Ursaring fainted, not even putting up a fight. However, now I had a free switch in and knowledge of what kind of Salamence it was, a mixed, Life Orbed Salamence.

.Shinji switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
Weavile lost 25% of its health.
Ithilien switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Weavile used Ice Punch.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 22% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

I brought out my Weavile and my opponent switched to Bronzong, just like before. I felt another Hypnosis coming so I switched to Torterra, the only member who could afford being put to sleep at the moment.

.Shinji switched in Torterra (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
Pointed stones dug into Torterra.
Torterra lost 6% of its health.
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Torterra fell asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Torterra's leftovers restored its health a little!
Torterra restored 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

.Shinji switched in Electivire (lvl 100 Electivire ?).
Pointed stones dug into Electivire.
Electivire lost 12% of its health.
Bronzong used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
The sandstorm rages.
Electivire is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Electivire lost 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

Ok. Now that one of my Pokemon were asleep I could switch into one of my attacks. I choose This was also a mistake, since Azumarill would've loved this free switch in and definately would've caused some damage to his team.

Electivire used Thunderbolt.
Bronzong lost 42% of its health.
Electivire lost 10% of its health.
Bronzong used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Electivire lost 72% of its health.
.Shinji's Electivire fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.

3 VS 5 (Ithilien)

I expected a Gyro Ball, to be honest. Oh well. I returned the pathetic Electivire and sent out my Azumarill.

.Shinji switched in Azumarill (lvl 100 Azumarill ?).
Pointed stones dug into Azumarill.
Azumarill lost 12% of its health.
Azumarill is tightening its focus!
Ithilien switched in Meganium (lvl 100 Meganium ?).
Azumarill used Focus Punch.
Meganium lost 37% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Meganium is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Meganium lost 6% of its health.
Azumarill is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Azumarill lost 6% of its health.
Meganium's leftovers restored its health a little!
Meganium restored 6% of its health.

Azumarill Focus Punched Meganium!

.Shinji switched in Torterra (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
Pointed stones dug into Torterra.
Torterra lost 6% of its health.
Meganium used Leech Seed.
The sandstorm rages.
Meganium is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Meganium lost 6% of its health.
Meganium's leftovers restored its health a little!
Meganium restored 6% of its health.
Torterra's leftovers restored its health a little!
Torterra restored 6% of its health.

You can't Leech Seed Grass types, so I switched to Torterra.

Meganium used Leaf Storm.
Torterra lost 40% of its health.
Meganium's special attack was harshly lowered.
Torterra is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Meganium is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Meganium lost 6% of its health.
Meganium's leftovers restored its health a little!
Meganium restored 6% of its health.
Torterra's leftovers restored its health a little!
Torterra restored 6% of its health.

Torterra took the blow like a spartan, even while he was sleeping.

Ithilien switched in Empoleon (lvl 100 Empoleon ?).
Torterra is fast asleep!
Empoleon's reflect wore off!
The sandstorm rages.
Torterra's leftovers restored its health a little!
Torterra restored 6% of its health.

Ithilien switched to Empoleon. I didn't want to get hit with Ice Beam so I switched to Azumarill. However, I forgot about all the extra damage it would take from being switched in.

.Shinji switched in Azumarill (lvl 100 Azumarill ?).
Pointed stones dug into Azumarill.
Azumarill lost 12% of its health.
Empoleon used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Azumarill lost 17% of its health.
.Shinji's Azumarill fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
2 VS 5 (Ithilien)

Useless. However, now Weavile had a free switch in and could set up.

.Shinji switched in Weavile (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Weavile is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Weavile.
Weavile lost 25% of its health.
Ithilien switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Weavile's attack!
Weavile used Swords Dance.
Weavile's attack was sharply raised.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.
Salamence is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Salamence lost 6% of its health.

Knowing that Empoleon fears Brick Break I Swords Danced on the switch. Intimidate hurt, but now my Weavile was at 130%? attack and ready to sweep.

Weavile used Night Slash.
Salamence lost 31% of its health.
Ithilien's Salamence fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.

2 VS 4 (Shinji)

The race against time began, Weavile would have to defeat all his Pokemon before it fainted from Sandstorm.

Ithilien switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Weavile used Night Slash.
A critical hit!
Bronzong lost 60% of its health.
Ithilien's Bronzong fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.

2 VS 3 (Shinji)

I Night Slashed the giant bell and managed to hit a critical area. Bronzong fell, never to Hypnosis one of my Pokemon again. Some may say that Weavile was lucky, however, when you manage to get it from a 30% effect, have not gotten another critical in the battle, and have had Torterra sleep for 3-4 turns in a row it wasn't as haxxy as it could've been.

Ithilien switched in Meganium (lvl 100 Meganium ?).
Weavile used Ice Punch.
It's super effective!
Meganium lost 63% of its health.
Ithilien's Meganium fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.

2 VS 2 (Shinji)

Meganium was next. Weavile slammed it down with Ice Punch. We were picking his pathetic Pokemon apart one by one!

Ithilien switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Weavile used Brick Break.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 100% of its health.
Ithilien's Tyranitar fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Weavile is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Weavile lost 6% of its health.
2 VS 1 (Shinji)

Tyranitar reared it's ugly head once more, however, it was not prepared for a Brick Break to the face!

Ithilien switched in Empoleon (lvl 100 Empoleon ?).
Weavile use Brick Break.
It's super effective!
Empoleon lost 76% of its health.
Ithilien's Empoleon fainted!

Weavile delivered the final blow, silencing the last of Ithilien's pathetic Pokemon.

2 VS 0 (Shinji)

.Shinji wins!
.Shinji: Good game.
Ithilien: yeah, you too
Ithilien has left the room.
tricky4u has left the room.
.Shinji:... Useless

Props:
Honckrow getting rid of Gengar
Weavile doing a great job
Shinji magically getting Azumarill back.
My opponent's Empoleon and Bronzong, which really gave my team a run for their money.

Slops:
Ursaring not doing anything
Torterra being asleep for about 80% of the battle

- -

Honestly, don't call me an ass. "Useless" and "Pathetic" are so it sounds a little more like Shinji. lolol

Akatsuki
11-12-2007, 03:43 PM
*applauds*

Well written. Azumarill seems to be very powerful. I should check it out sometime.

Zetsubou Student
11-12-2007, 04:38 PM
Thanks!

Azumarill's a great Pokemon. The only downside that it can't have both Ice Punch and Aqua Jet. D:

Junior
11-12-2007, 11:57 PM
Nice warstory. Worth the read too. =)

@Akat: CBAzumarill with Aqua Jet does really well, I can guarantee you that.

Skandranon
11-13-2007, 12:34 AM
one of the best reads i've had great intro and good call on the dancing weaville

darth_massey
11-13-2007, 01:01 AM
great read! feel free to post more often, cause i'll enjoy it.

Zetsubou Student
11-13-2007, 01:45 PM
Yay! I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

WildAce
11-13-2007, 02:04 PM
Nice battle, excellent comments, and storyish theme to boot.
All I can say is thank you, and welcome to Pojo :D.

-Airknight-
11-13-2007, 06:27 PM
Who's Shinji?

Nice battle.

WildAce
11-13-2007, 08:10 PM
Who's Shinji?

Nice battle.

Paul (http://www.serebii.net/anime/characters/paul.shtml) from the DP Anime.

Xonmeän
11-13-2007, 08:26 PM
It felt like I was reading a decent fanfic there...I commend you for that. I'm hoping you do some more warstories in the future. I like your style of writing it. One thing I'd like to see if you keep this style is a little more personality in your opponent (tough with Warstories, but it would be fun to read with some trash talking going back and forth. :D).

Great themed team, great read, and great job. Welcome to Pojo.

sliferhaven
11-13-2007, 11:10 PM
Very well written, interesting team, and overall awesome. Good job, you win at life.

darth_massey
11-14-2007, 12:29 AM
i wish i could win at life...i'm jealous

WildAce
11-14-2007, 12:54 AM
i wish i could win at life...i'm jealous

This is a Pokemon Forum....we're ALL champions!!!!!!!!:D

darth_massey
11-14-2007, 02:04 AM
This is a Pokemon Forum....we're ALL champions!!!!!!!!:D

sweet... :cool:

Junior
11-14-2007, 02:58 AM
This is a Pokemon Forum....we're ALL champions!!!!!!!!:D

I ban you 5 days for spamming.
WildAce now bans Junior for 2 minutes.
EDIT: How dare you! xD Did you really? Lol.

Btw, post more war stories NOW! >=)

Jiggy-Ninja
11-14-2007, 04:33 AM
This is a Pokemon Forum....we're ALL champions!!!!!!!!:D
I'm not a champion....

I...am.........SPARTA!!!!

Jiggy says 3 thumbs way, way up for this story (Wait, when did I get 3?). I liked reading about as much as I like writing my own stories.

BTW, Swords Dance + Intimidate leaves Weavile at 150% ATK, not 130%.

Zetsubou Student
11-14-2007, 03:42 PM
Ha ha. Thanks guys.

I'll definately try that next time I write a warstory, thanks Xonmean.

Ah. Cool. Thanks for correcting that, Jiggy-Ninja.

darth_massey
11-17-2007, 01:24 AM
well what are you waiting for?!?

GO MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!

(i need more enjoyment out of this part of Pojo!)

grim mouser
11-17-2007, 09:34 AM
Nice Warstory. Torterra really got shafted in this battle, huh? xD

=)

rozzster
08-12-2009, 02:06 PM
amazing battle thankyou for the wonderous read i need to train a weavile

Xonmeän
08-12-2009, 02:52 PM
Don't revive 2 year old threads.