someone help with my deck?

[punwisp]

monsters:
The Masked Beast

relequished

Demise king of armegddonx2

sonic birdx2(brings ritual spell card to hand from deck

Senju of the thousand handsx2(brings ritual monster to hand from deck)

Asura Priest

mirage dragon

Gemini Elf

D.D. warrior lady

Gogiga Gagagigo(good with creator and rituals)

Gagagigo

luster dragon

Beserk Gorilla

Bazoo The Soul Eater

new doria

La Jinn the mystical genie of the lamp

spells:

lightning vortex

premature burial

swords of revealing light

mage power

heavy storm

axe of despair

advanced ritual artx2(used for takeing normal monster from feck for rituals and creator)

snatch steal

ritual foregone

nobleman of crossout

contract of the abyssx3

Traps:
call of the haunted

magic cylinder

skill drain

seven tools of the banditx2

[Xing*]

WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS??????????
1. Pick ONE theme.
2. Reduce the size to 40 cards.
3. Self-Destruction Button...........ew............. One of the worst cards reviewed on Pojo.......
4. Ring of Destruction >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Self-Destruction Button. RoD IS currently the #2 best trap.

Sorry for harshness......... but............ the moment I see Self-Destruction Button..... Again, sorry. 2/10

You have all sorts of cards in there. I see spellcasters, dragons, a random Gogiga Gagagigo(try to say that 5 times fast), Black Tyranno is just bad, etc...

Choose a theme and then I'll fix.

[evolvingelder]

There are alot of different themes in this deck. Pick one, rituals/creator/earth just pick something, not all of them. Try making the deck have a less cards b/c as of right now its pretty large.

[punwisp]

ok ill explain this deck so it makes more sense. This is mainly a ritual deck and ive beaten many pple with it.

i advanced ritual to take normal monster out of my deck into the graveyard to bring out ritual monsters i use creator to bring out monsters for rituling, i useally use him for my defense combo: creator face up defense with skill drain and mage power(works every time) and i use earthquake(puts ur opponents monsters in defense postion, well all monsters) then bring out tyranno and attack directly. so it isnt quite random as you think.

its a ritual mosnter deck, creator is very usefull in this deck. gaga is very useful for rituals because its exactly 8 stars, and all my rituals have 8 starts, plus i can use creator to bring him back. this deck isnt as bad as you think.

my wins with this deck are 16 wins 5 losses(2 from 3 ways or 4 way duels."note" this deck sucks while dueling more then one person at a time). i think this deck is pretty good. creator is my monster i use for defense,getting monsters for rituals, bring back powerful monsters and such.

i would appreicate it if u guys put up cards i should add or take out, and i just threw indestruction button a while ago, i thought it would be a good last result. also the deck is a little less then 50 and i know im still trying to kick cards out

[Xing*]

ok ill explain this deck so it makes more sense
this is mainly a ritual deck and ive beaten many pple with it. i advanced ritual to take normal monster out of my deck into the graveyard to bring out ritual monsters i use creator to bring out monsters for rituling, i useally use him for my defense combo: creator face up defense with skill drain and mage power(works every time) and i use earthquake(puts ur opponents monsters in defense postion, well all monsters) then bring out tyranno and attack directly. so it isnt quite random as you think.

its a ritual mosnter deck, creator is very usefull in this deck. gaga is very useful for rituals because its exactly 8 stars, and all my rituals have 8 starts, plus i can use creator to bring him back. this deck isnt as bad as you think.

my wins with this deck are 16 wins 5 losses(2 from 3 ways or 4 way duels."note" this deck sucks while dueling more then one person at a time). i think this deck is pretty good. creator is my monster i use for defense,getting monsters for rituals, bring back powerful monsters and such.

i would appreicate it if u guys put up cards i should add or take out, and i just threw indestruction button a while ago, i thought it would be a good last result. also the deck is a little less then 50 and i know im still trying to kick cards out


Who did you play against? Playing against friends and casual play won't help. (Why do I always have the urge to help beginners?!)You need to play against competitive players and in tournaments will improve you. You want to run Advanced Ritual deck, right? Then you shouldn't have cards like Black Tyranno, the Creator, etc...

Try this:
3x Dark Master Zorc(The best Ritual)
3x Blue-Eyes White Dragon
3x Gene-Warped Warwolf
3x Luster Dragon
1x Sangan
1x Spirit Reaper
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
2x Gravekeeper's Spy
1x Twin-Headed Behemoth
1x Treeborn Frog

3x Advanced Ritual Art
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
1x Snatch Steal(MUST)
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Scapegoat
1x Dragon's Mirror
1x Pot of Avarice
2x Smashing Ground
1x Premature Burial

1x Call of the Haunted
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Ring of Destruction
1x Mirror Force(MUST)
2x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Justi-Break

You'll do WAY better with this deck.

[punwisp]

um actualy im not a begginer, ive played for more then 3 years, i just never made a ritual deck, also i dont have alot of ritual monsters, just reshef, BLSx2 and masked beast. ive played agianst many pple, 2 which play which were tourny players. and the deck did pretty well. the earthquake and tyranno combo ive always thought was good.

and creator has always helped, plus i can bring back my ritual monsters or bring back monsters for a ritual monster.

[weaselkid91]

i ahve no idea whats going on, but this was bugging me...
and i just threw indestruction button a while ago, i thought it would be a good last result...
last RESORT. last resort, not result.

[Xing*]

um actualy im not a begginer, ive played for more then 3 years, i just never made a ritual deck, also i dont have alot of ritual monsters, just reshef, BLSx2 and masked beast. ive played agianst many pple, 2 which play which were tourny players. and the deck did pretty well. the earthquake and tyranno combo ive always thought was good.

and creator has always helped, plus i can bring back my ritual monsters or bring back monsters for a ritual monster.

You do know that if your opponent has any Spell/Traps you can't activate Tyranno's effect right? You've been playing for 3 years?!:eek: Tourney players =/= competitive players. MOST(not saying all) competitive players use CC. The people you played, have they top8 tournaments? Try my deck fix for you. If you don't have Zorc, just use 1 Reshef and 2 Black Luster Soldier. Again, 2/10. I have to be harsh in order to help you.;)

Also, it's almost impossible to pull Self-Destruction Button off. There must be a difference of 7000 LP... and your's have to be lower. Terrible topdeck, terrible effect, and impossible restriction.

[killing_edge422]

punwisp, u are talkin mess. i tottaly agree asfunch on this one.
although i never did like ritual decks as i see them 2 situational.
u should try buildin a deck around END OF THE WORLD

[punwisp]

oh,playing the game for 3 years and messing up on one effect doesnt make me a begginer, i simply miss read it, i thought it meant if your oponent didnt have any attack postition monsters and only defense it can attack directly, i didnt think aboutt he spell and trap thing.

but i still think creator should stay in

Additional Comment:

also theres only 41 cards in my deck now

[Xing*]

oh,playing the game for 3 years and messing up on one effect doesnt make me a begginer, i simply miss read it, i thought it meant if your oponent didnt have any attack postition monsters and only defense it can attack directly, i didnt think aboutt he spell and trap thing.

but i still think creator should stay in

THIS is what makes me think you're a beginner.(Don't me angry at me, just trying to help) The Creator only belongs in its own deck. You needs to get with the metagame times. Again, try my deck list for you. You simply can't throw in random cards in a deck that can only belong in its own deck. 2/10 still.

[punwisp]

PPLE make there own decks there own ways, the creator doesnt have to ONLY work in its own deck, and im not a begginer. and i think creator works well in this deck, after all youve never used this deck so you wouldnt exactly know

[ilikepwnpizza10]

Who did you play against? Playing against friends and casual play won't help. (Why do I always have the urge to help beginners?!)You need to play against competitive players and in tournaments will improve you. You want to run Advanced Ritual deck, right? Then you shouldn't have cards like Black Tyranno, the Creator, etc...

Try this:
3x Dark Master Zorc(The best Ritual)/3x Demise-King of Armageddon
3x Blue-Eyes White Dragon
3x Gene-Warped Warwolf
3x Luster Dragon
1x Sangan
1x Spirit Reaper
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
2x Gravekeeper's Spy
1x Twin-Headed Behemoth
1x Treeborn Frog

3x Advanced Ritual Art
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
1x Snatch Steal(MUST)
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Scapegoat
1x Dragon's Mirror
1x Pot of Avarice
2x Smashing Ground
1x Premature Burial

1x Call of the Haunted
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Ring of Destruction
1x Mirror Force(MUST)
2x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Justi-Break

You'll do WAY better with this deck.



demise is pretty beastly too. yea build this deck with either demise or zorc. they are both discustingly good with advanced ritual art

[punwisp]

why not 2 zorc and 1 demise, demise is good but his effect is costy

[Xing*]

why not 2 zorc and 1 demise, demise is good but his effect is costy

Dark Master Zorc
Pros:
2700 ATK-kills monarchs/phoenix
5/6 chance able to destroy opponent's monster
Able to Raigeki all opponen's monsters
Potential to win games
Tewart said this card is powerful

Cons:
1500 DEF
1/6 chance of backfire

Demise, King of Armageddon
Pros:
Potential to win games
Able to nuke field
Only card on field

Cons:
2400 ATK, suicide with monarch/phoenix
2000 LP cost
Also nukes your field

Zorc > Demise.

Demise can be better at times.
2 Zorc and 1 Demise can be a little harmful, still a good option.

[punwisp]

harmful as a good thing or bad thing

Additional Comment:

i guess i could still add gaga in exchange of 1 blue eyes, i mean theres only a 50 atk difference, and wtf is dragon mirror for?? thats for fusions...

[The Strange One]

Although I have to agree that the deck lacks flow, I am a huge advocate of the "Play Your Way" sentiment. If The Creator helps you more than hurts you, by all means keep him in the roster.

As for the rituals, having three different Ritual Monsters with three Different kinds of Ritual Spell may be a bit much to handle. Try to focus on one or two Ritual Monsters and, if possible, limit the Rituals Spells. You may want to consider Contract with the Abyss, a SPell from Dark Crisis.

Contract with the Abyss can be used as a Ritual for ANY Dark monster... that means Zorc, Relinquished, The Masked Beast, and Demise.

Relinquished is likely the best Ritual Monster because it has a great effect and requires a single Tribute, but the raw power route is also a fun path to take.

As for the rest of the monsters, its up to you...

[punwisp]

i have a contract in my deck, also thank you

[d.d. ewg]

i will just say i doubt this deck will win a turnament(doubtfull u win one match) or **** ppl realy bad maybe 2.5/10 is my rating

[punwisp]

Lol well ive won 16 duels and 5 losses. *16 different pple* some were tournament players

[ThE JuIcEbOx HeRo]

uhh this is a wreck...... i really dont even know where to start....well then i wont

Also try makin it so everyone can read it without having their eyes checked


2/10

[punwisp]

isnt really a wreck, of course u wouldnt know becuase u havent used it in a duel

[DeathJester1324]

Hmmm, though youre deck idea may sound good on paper, it needs a little tweaking to become consistent

*cracks knuckles*

First lets drop all the Sonic Bird and Sanja of the Thousand Hands for 3 Manju of the Ten-Thousand Hands, who allows you to get a Ritual Magic or Ritual Monster upon its summon. With that extra space left open we'll toss in a
Blue-Eyes.

Next we'll drop all of your Ritual monsters that you listed. While they are powerful, they dont really do much, except carry a big attack. In their place we'll add in 3 Dark Master Zorc, both a powerful monster with a powerful effect. Once again with that extra space left open, we'll add in another Blue-Eyes.

To go with the Advanced Ritual Arts, we're going to take out Gagagigo, Giga Gagagigo, and La Ginn for 3 Gene-Warper Warwolf, its more powerful and it is still a level 4 monster. We might as well keep your Luster Dragon, so we'll drop Stealth Bird and Gemini Elf for 2 more. As for the rest of your monster line-up, for better consistency, we'll take them out for the suggestions Funch made...

Sangan
Spirit Reaper
D.D. Warrior Lady
2 Gravekeeper's Spy
Twin-Headed Behemoth
Treeborn Frog

They will help defend you and your lifepoints while you set up for your Rituals.

Next we'll take out...

black luster ritual
mage power
axe of despair
ritual foregone
contract of the abyss

for...

+1 Advanced Ritual Art
+1 Blue Eyes
+1 Pot of Avarice
+2 Smashing Ground (Fissure work also as a short term replacment)
+1 Fullfillment of the Contract

Finally, for your traps we're going to take out the Self Destruct and Skill Drain. In their place we can add in a Justi-Break, Torrential, 2 Sakuretsu, and 2 Birthright. Once again, these will go along with your Normal monsters, and keep you defended until you can get your Rituals out.

The final decklist should look something like this...

3 Dark Master Zorc
3 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
3 Gene-Warped Warwolf
3 Luster Dragon
3 Manju of the Ten-Thousand Hands
2 Gravekeeper's Spy
Sangan
Spirit Reaper
D.D. Warrior Lady
Twin-Headed Behemoth
Treeborn Frog

3 Advanced Ritual Art
2 Smashing Ground (Fissure)
Fullfillmetn of the Contract
Pot of Avarice
Snatch Steal
Premature Burial
Lightning Vortex
Heavy Storm
Swords of Revealing Light

2 Sakuretsu Armor
2 Birthright
Call of the Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Justi-Break

*whew*

ok, with the fixes I gave, your deck should run a lot better and a lot smoother. Hope it helps ^^

[FrogHero24]

ok ill explain this deck so it makes more sense. This is mainly a ritual deck and ive beaten many pple with it.

i advanced ritual to take normal monster out of my deck into the graveyard to bring out ritual monsters i use creator to bring out monsters for rituling, i useally use him for my defense combo: creator face up defense with skill drain and mage power(works every time) and i use earthquake(puts ur opponents monsters in defense postion, well all monsters) then bring out tyranno and attack directly. so it isnt quite random as you think.

its a ritual mosnter deck, creator is very usefull in this deck. gaga is very useful for rituals because its exactly 8 stars, and all my rituals have 8 starts, plus i can use creator to bring him back. this deck isnt as bad as you think.

my wins with this deck are 16 wins 5 losses(2 from 3 ways or 4 way duels."note" this deck sucks while dueling more then one person at a time). i think this deck is pretty good. creator is my monster i use for defense,getting monsters for rituals, bring back powerful monsters and such.

i would appreicate it if u guys put up cards i should add or take out, and i just threw indestruction button a while ago, i thought it would be a good last result. also the deck is a little less then 50 and i know im still trying to kick cards out


why the hell would you want to use skill drain when u have creator on the field
u know with skill drain on the field black tyranno loses his effect

lmao

[ThE JuIcEbOx HeRo]

-Whole Deck
+Lotta Help

[Xing*]

OK, let me say this in a very clear way:

1. Competitive Player =/= People who go to tourneys. You need to duel people who usually make Top8 to see how your deck do in the current metagame.
2. Don't listen to people like Team Venture-Kevin.
3. Take my advices and other good advices like the one from DeathJester, HE IS A POJO WRITER.
4. Again, don't use random cards.

[punwisp]

and then agian
I did NOT use random cards, and i already edited it

Additional Comment:

why the hell would you want to use skill drain when u have creator on the field
u know with skill drain on the field black tyranno loses his effect

lmao

dude i never ever said i used skill drain with tyranno. also why lose all of them? most of them are normal ritual monsters, so skill drain or non spellcasting area will work on them. and i cant get all of those, ill put thrm on my want list.

Additional Comment:

omg, YES I *******CKING KNOW THAT, I DONT USE TYRANNO WHEN SKILL DRAIN IS ON THE FIELD, IM NOT A *******
also i edited my deck today, ill edit the list

Additional Comment:

oops thought it was another person saying a skill drain and tyranno, my bad

[bakura1]

the less cads in a deck makes it more easy to get the cards you need when you need them the most.