rate my lv deck

[maynard113]

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1x threatening roar
1x card destruction
1x level up
1x magic jammer
1x rising energy
1x luster dragon
1x ordeal of a traveler
2x horus the black flame dragon lv 8
1x ultimate insect lv 7
3x flying kamikari #1
1x mystic swordsman lv 4
2x pitch black warwolf
1x royal decree
1x swords of revealing light
1x penguin soldier
1x ultimate insect lv 3
3x level modulations
1x mystic swordsman lv 6
3x hydrogeddon
1x ultimate insect lv 5
1x mystic swordsman lv 2
3x mirage dragons
1x armed dragon lv 3
2x sakuretsu armor
2x armed dragon lv 5
1x seven tools of the bandit
1x mirror force
1x mage power
1x united we stand
1x magic cylinder
1x offerings to the doomed
1x heavy storm
1x interdimensional matter transporter
1x armed dragon lv 7
1x horus the black flame dragon lv 6
1x horus the black flame dragon lv 4
1x spirit reaper
1x jinzo
after looking at my deck can u tell me what to change and what i need

maynard 113

[Forest King]

First off. Your deck is way too disorganized. you need to focus more on what you need. when your playing and you find yourself with useless cards in your hand, or cards that don't make a diff. think about taking those out.

[Sameshima]

How does this belong in the OCG section again?

[The Phosaphor]

i have to say your insane you need 2x level up also more level monsters 3rd try useing ther types and attributtes next youll need drawing cards and give it more lv monsters

[Forest King]

magic jammer is so oldschool. get spell shield type-8, if you really need it