Grandkaijudomaster
12-12-2006, 02:51 AM
Ok. I'm writing a fanfiction. But before I continue writing I want to find out if the storys good enough to spend my time. Ok here goes:
Fullmetal Alchemist: The laws of the universe
20 years after the film, Ed and Al managed to escape Germany before the Nazis took over and flee to America. Along with a certain Albert Einstein. Ed and Al explain to Einstein about the Uranium bomb that came over from there world. Einstein explains some of the science behind it, and knows that if a weapon like that were to get in the hands of the Nazis they would be unstopable. Suddenly for no apparent reason, Ed and Al's alchemic power starts working again. Eistein thinks it might be caused by a "shockwave" of matter-energy conversion caused by a nuclear detonation that has allowed them to do this. Meaning that the Nazis have begun Nuclear testing. Ed and Al get involved with a secret mission with the manhatan project to destroy the Nazis attempt to build the nuke, while Eintsein helps America develop one.
I haven't rly thought about the plot after that. Gimme a hand.
Fullmetal Alchemist: The laws of the universe
20 years after the film, Ed and Al managed to escape Germany before the Nazis took over and flee to America. Along with a certain Albert Einstein. Ed and Al explain to Einstein about the Uranium bomb that came over from there world. Einstein explains some of the science behind it, and knows that if a weapon like that were to get in the hands of the Nazis they would be unstopable. Suddenly for no apparent reason, Ed and Al's alchemic power starts working again. Eistein thinks it might be caused by a "shockwave" of matter-energy conversion caused by a nuclear detonation that has allowed them to do this. Meaning that the Nazis have begun Nuclear testing. Ed and Al get involved with a secret mission with the manhatan project to destroy the Nazis attempt to build the nuke, while Eintsein helps America develop one.
I haven't rly thought about the plot after that. Gimme a hand.