NEw to MAGIC BUT MADE A GOOD DECK

[Spiked swordsman]

MANA

10 montian
3 forest
6 water
9 swamp
1 plain

creatures
multi colered Golgari rot wurm


swamp

Essence drain
slith bloodletter
nim shrieker
wrench mind
mephitic OOzo

plains
bushi tenderfoot

water

Broodstar
somber hover guard
2 assert athority
thirst for knolage

red

shrapelnl blast
lava axe
megatog


artifacts
2myr enforcer
2rust elemental
2pyrit spellbomb
2 talisman of induljence

[sainkaa]

you have 29 sources of mana.. that is pretty high.. and mutli colord decks can use dual lands or signets or even karoos.

[dwarven_anarchist]

Your deck lacks any sort of guiding theme. How do you want to win?

Try green spells like Rampant Growth and Kodama's Reach to get your lands in play faster if you are playing a 5 color deck.

[Spiked swordsman]

i do not have many cards

[nightmaster]

too many colors since the cards you have dont fit together colorwise like guildmages can and you dont have any cards that allow you to play cards from you're hand regardless of color

[Articuno9]

these cards do not blend well together at all. mephitic ooze?- this should only go in B/artifact nim decks ONLY

[dwarven_anarchist]

i do not have many cards
What type of budget do you have?

I reccomend picking up a precon of your favorite color or two color combination, and augmenting it with what you already have, if that is possible.

[nightmaster]

take out the talisman, spellbomb, rust elemental, and shrapnel blast to get more copies of other cards. for a different burn card get lightning helix or volcanic hammer

[Scout]

I wish more people would actually take time to check their spelling. It just appears they didn't make an effort on their part yet they want intelligent, constructive feedback from others.

[Spiked swordsman]

I have a ok size bugget

[dwarven_anarchist]

I have a ok size bugget
Aside from being exceedingly funny, that really doesn't say much.

OK, I'll be frank; your deck needs major aid. What are your two favorite colors? I ask because, as a rule it is best to stink to, at most, two colors without Duals n' such.

[vindicate]

Hey don't say a deck sucks unless you got better check out mine. http://www.pojo.biz/board/showthread.php?t=399880 talk crap about this and i'll want to see a deck of yours