Some Random Cards

[Aneximines]

Extus, the Hollow One {0}
Legendary Creature
(Extus is colorless)
If Extus would leave play, remove it from the game instead.
From nothing it came, and to nothing it will return.
1/1


Quiet the Machine {G}
Instant
Counter target activated or triggered ability of an artifact. That artifact loses all abilities until end of turn. (mana abilities can't be targeted)


Mausoleum {2}
Artifact
Cards in your graveyard cannot be the target of spells or abilities you do not control.
{B}{B}: Remove all cards in your graveyard from the game.
{0}: Return to your graveyard all cards removed by Mausoleum, in the order of your choice.


Ethereal Wisp {U}{W}
Creature - Wisp
Flying
Protection from spells and permanents.
{0}: Ethereal Wips phases out.
Only in enchanted worlds can Ethereal Wisps be found.
2/0


Timequake {1}{U}{U}{U}
World Enchantment
All other permanents have phasing.
When Timequake comes into play, for each other permanent, flip a coin. If the coin comes up heads, that permanent phases out.


Puff of Smoke {U}
Instant
Add {U} to your mana pool. Draw a card. Remove Puff of Smoke from the game.

[Brockiflower]

Extus, the Hollow One {0}
Legendary Creature
(Extus is colorless)
If Extus would leave play, remove it from the game instead.
From nothing it came, and to nothing it will return.
1/1

Shouldn't this be an artifact creature that way you dont need the colorless clause

Quiet the Machine {G}
Instant
Counter target activated or triggered ability of an artifact. That artifact loses all abilities until end of turn.

Needs reminder text that mana anilities cant be countered

Mausoleum {2}
Artifact
Cards in your graveyard cannot be the target of spells or abilities you do not control.
{B}{B}: Remove all cards in your graveyard from the game.
{0}: Return to your graveyard all cards removed by Mausoleum, in the order of your choice.


Ethereal Wisp {U}{W}
Creature - Wisp
Flying
Protection from spells and permanents.
{0}: Ethereal Wips phases out.
Only in enchanted worlds can Ethereal Wisps be found.
2/0
Umm thats really bad. You play it and it just dies.

Timequake {1}{U}{U}{U}
World Enchantment
All other permanents have phasing.
When Timequake comes into play, for each other permanent, flip a coin. If the coin comes up heads, that permanent phases out.


Puff of Smoke {U}
Instant
Add {U} to your mana pool. Draw a card. Remove Puff of Smoke from the game.
Fixes and comments underneath the cards themself.

[Dunjohn]

I'm trying to decide if Puff of Smoke is too good, and if Evermind is worth comparing it to. Puff of Smoke is basically Urza's Bauble remade; a 56-card deck. Dunno if it's exactly broken, though. Nah I reckon it's good.

I think Extus is a little too good, an Isamaru and an Extus on turn 1 would be teh b34ts. However, since every single deck would be playing four Extuses it would die straight away. Only to be replayed. Basically not a card that's conducive to a good Magic environment.

[Hazen]

mausoleum is wrong in T1 Friggorid. Here comes ashen ghoul!

[Aneximines]

Extus, the Hollow One
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Shouldn't this be an artifact creature that way you dont need the colorless clause

Why tack on a whole type just to avoid a very short line of reminder text? Lacking color fits Extus's barely-there flavor, but there's nothing particularly artifact-y about him.

Quiet the Machine
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Needs reminder text that mana anilities cant be countered

Added.

Thank you :)

Ethereal Wisp
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Umm thats really bad. You play it and it just dies.

Read the flavor text. Think Glorious Anthem and its ilk.

The idea is that the Wisp itself is virtually immune to removal, but depends on the survival of another card to stay in play.


Fixes and comments underneath the cards themself.

Replies under comments in abridged quote.

I'm trying to decide if Puff of Smoke is too good, and if Evermind is worth comparing it to. Puff of Smoke is basically Urza's Bauble remade; a 56-card deck. Dunno if it's exactly broken, though. Nah I reckon it's good.

Originally I just had it as a card with cycling {0}, but that was obviously a bit too good. With this version you at least have to bother with mana to some extent.

I think Extus is a little too good, an Isamaru and an Extus on turn 1 would be teh b34ts. However, since every single deck would be playing four Extuses it would die straight away. Only to be replayed. Basically not a card that's conducive to a good Magic environment.

Hm. In the metagame I play in I don't think he would be such a force (he doesn't even work with Skullclamp); useable, but not dominating. I could see it being problematic in type 2, though.