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TheLastSaiyan
04-03-2006, 01:19 PM
Hi, these are drawings I did of Blink from the X-men: I have posted both the color and the original drawings:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blink.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blinkcolor.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blink2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blink2color.jpg
PEACE!!
Flames of a Phoenix
04-03-2006, 01:30 PM
Your coloring ruins the pictures.
The first one, the face one, the nose looks smashed, the lips look too tall and the chin is too.. pointy? It's a decent drawing, except for the hair which looks clunky and tentacle-like.
The second one doesn't look at good because the pen you used was probably too fat or something.
Yata-Garasu 1
04-03-2006, 02:06 PM
The coloring, especially shading. Needs serious work.
Hollow Golem
04-03-2006, 04:27 PM
Your coloring ruins the pictures.
The first one, the face one, the nose looks smashed, the lips look too tall and the chin is too.. pointy? It's a decent drawing, except for the hair which looks clunky and tentacle-like.
The second one doesn't look at good because the pen you used was probably too fat or something.
Yeah. Always listen to this person. The first one I actually like except for the hair and nose, and the shading. You need to blend it. The knuckles are weird too.
TheLastSaiyan
04-04-2006, 12:08 AM
Hey, I listened to your critiques and decided to redo it, so here it is again:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blink3.jpg
Also, you all didn't really elaborate too much on the second pic, so if you could tell me what you feel is wrong with that or what you think needs to be fixed that'd be great. Thanks. PEACE!!
Flames of a Phoenix
04-04-2006, 12:20 AM
Now she looks metalic. Don't make your shading so black/white unless you know what and where to shade.
Hollow Golem
04-04-2006, 07:15 AM
Much, much better. Good job. But, still, as Flames says just practice a little more and you'll be really good.
TheLastSaiyan
04-04-2006, 05:36 PM
Hi, thanks for the compliments. I also went ahead and recolored it as well. So here it is again:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blinkcolorredo.jpg
PEACE!!
Hollow Golem
04-04-2006, 05:40 PM
Hi, thanks for the compliments. I also went ahead and recolored it as well. So here it is again:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/LastSaiyan20/Color%20Drawings%20Sketches/Blinkcolorredo.jpg
PEACE!!
Also a lot better. I like how it gives a comic book feel.
Black Panther
04-04-2006, 06:13 PM
Also a lot better. I like how it gives a comic book feel.
I agree it is a lot better.
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