Kopaka of Ice
04-22-2004, 05:24 PM
This is my attempt to fix and redo my original fanfic. If I have offended anyone with this fanfic, I deeply apologize.
KAIBA ATTACKS
The tall boy with dark brown hair and gloomy blue eyes looked down at his opponent, a short but confident boy, blonde hair dropping from his forehead and red-black spiked hair matching his brown eyes.
“Yugi…this match shall be another struggle in our countless battles. This time, I shall defeat you…” The tall, darkened boy muttered.
As though he heard it perfectly, his opponent answered, “Indeed, Kaiba. But I think I will be the one to win. I’ve defeated you many times before, and I shall do it again.”
“We’ll see…” Kaiba replied coldly.
“These two boys are the top class duelists of Japan! They will be competing for the right to be representative in the World Nations Tournament. Will the winner be the Almighty, Motou Yugi? Or will it be the Draconic, Kaiba Seto? Let The Shadow Game begin!” The silvery hair man, wearing a red suit, exclaimed with happiness and a hint of seriousness.
Yugi and Kaiba drew their first 5 cards and yelled, “DUEL” to signify the start.
Seto drew his card and smirked. “I’ll put Saggi the Evil Clown in defense mode. I’ll add this Magic/Trap card down as a second defense. My turn ends!”
Kaiba's Blue coat fluttered in the wind as a black and yellow suited Clown pulled itself up from the ground, cackling.
Saggi the Evil Clown- 600/1500
Kaiba - 4000
Yugi - 4000
Yugi drew his sixth card. He thought to himself, “The facedown card, it’s definitely Crush Card…I will regret attacking if it is…” He chose a card from his hand. “Curse of Dragon in attack mode! Now my dragon will attack your clown!”
Curse of Dragon-2000/1500
“Hell Flames!” The golden wyrm inhaled deeply and blew out a wave of scalding hot flames. The flames burned Saggi’s suit up but the clown cackled maniacally as he shot a sphere of darkness at Curse of Dragon. “Demon Clown’s Light!”
“What? Saggi, the Dark Clown can’t attack in defense mode!” Yugi yelled out.
“True…Saggi the Dark Clown can’t…however; this is Saggi the Evil Clown! His effect destroys Monsters that have an attack higher than his defense when attacked but he stays alive on the field and you take damage equal to the difference!” Kaiba smirked at Yugi.
The Sphere hit the golden dragon and it roared in pain as it imploded. Blood splattered upon the Yugi's dark blue sleeveless shirt and black pants. Saggi cackled even more and danced around like a monkey. Yugi growled at the clown then chose another card.
“I’ll set one card face-down and end my turn!”
Yugi-3500
Kaiba-4000
Kaiba drew is card and didn’t even look at it before summoning. “Go, my Enraged Battle Ox! And with it I’ll flip, this card up! Behold the power of, Repeat Action! Its magic will repeat the last action I did during this turn, which means I summon another Enraged Battle Ox!”
Yugi’s eyes widened as two Minotaur dug up from the ground and held their axes tightly. They grunted and snorted then attacked Yugi. The face down card flipped upward revealing a trap card. The humanoid Oxen were confused and smashed into a mirror both seemingly dying of a concussion.
“That’s the power of Mirror Force, Kaiba!” Yugi chuckled.
“Do you seriously think a pair of Minotaur ramming into a mirror and dying is funny, Yugi? The turn ends now” Kaiba said with a serious look on his face.
Yugi drew his card and smirked. “I’ll set this monster into Defense mode and end my turn.” A face-down card appeared on the ground.
Kaiba drew his card. “There’s something strange about Yugi…” he thought to himself and chose 2 cards.
Bakura, Jonouchi, Honda and Anzu looked on as the two duelists continued. Anzu seemed worried about the mentality of the duelists dueling. She’d noticed that the Duels became bloodier ever since Kaiba upgraded to new technology he figured from the power of the Millennium Items.
Jonouchi cheered for his friend, “Go Yugi! Kick his ass!”
Honda yelled with Jonouchi, “Great job, Yugi! Get him!”
Anzu looked back at Bakura who seemed strange again. She wondered if the other Bakura had taken over again. Bakura looked back at her; his greenish blue eyes were different in a reddish shade. He also had the look of a psychopathic murderer. Anzu shivered and turned back to the battle and Bakura did the same.
“Spear Dragon summoned! Dragon Spear!”
The Blue Dragon flew down from the clouds and stabbed right through Yugi’s monster with its Sword-like snout. The green-armored knight, Celtic Guardian grunted in pain as blood dripped from the gap in his stomach, and it dripped from his mouth as he fell down dead, spreading on the ground.
Yugi- 2800
Kaiba- 4000
Yugi growled and drew his card and threw it out to the field.
“Eat this! Let’s go, Dark Magician Girl!”
The blonde girl with green eyes giggled as she twirled her staff. Her Black and Red armor shone on her purple shirt and red skirt. Yugi pointed towards Spear Dragon and yelled, “Murky Burning!”
Dark Magician Girl-2000/1700 – Gains 300 points per Dark Magician or Magician of Black Chaos in each player’s graveyard
Dark Magician Girl charged at the blue dragon and the tip of her staff glew bright, sky blue. She slammed the dragon in the head with the rod and magic flew around the dragon. It screamed in pain as it dissolved into dust. Yugi chose another card, “One card facedown and end turn.”
“Great…That’s the Yugi I know…” Kaiba smirked as he drew his card. “I End my Turn.”
Yugi Drew his card and threw it out immediately. “Go, Magician’s Valkyrie! Attack, Saggi, with Shiny Burning!”
A blonde girl who seemed no younger than Dark Magician Girl lunged forward at Saggi and threw her staff, sharp end forward, at the maniacal demon clown. The clown grunted and grabbed the staff, and the young girl seemed to freak out. The Clown Cackled like a psychopath and threw the girl’s staff back at her, impaling her. Blood dripped from her chest as the staff stuck in and she dropped to the ground.
“What was that for, Yugi? Are you becoming an idiot?” Kaiba looked puzzled at Yugi.
“You’ll see, Kaiba! I’ll show you, my power…” Yugi replied smiling.
Yugi- 2700
Kaiba- 3900
Kaiba drew his card. “I’ll summon, Sword Stalker, the Bringer of Vengeance! Now Attack the Magician Girl with Vengeance Strike!”
The Black knight looked at his fallen allies and tears of sadness appeared under his eyes. He howled in sadness and raised his sword, red cape flurrying in the wind, lunging at Dark Magician Girl.
Sword Stalker, Bringer of Vengeance- 2000/1700- Gains 400 ATK per monster in owner’s graveyard
Yugi smirked and flipped his face-down card. “Say Hello to Magical Hats!”
The Magician Girl laughed as she pulled 3 Hats from behind her. She threw them down and dived into one of them as they spun around flashing and changing places. Yugi dropped a card into one of the hats as they spun.
“Damn you!” The Swords Stalker yelled as he narrowly missed the Magician Girl. Yugi jumped in surprise when the Knight said this. He looked at Kaiba quickly who was smirking.
“What’s wrong Yugi? You didn’t know this was a Shadow Game? If not, you didn’t pay much attention to Pegasus at the beginning.” Kaiba stated calmly.
Yugi growled and Kaiba grunted. “It’s your turn, Yugi.”
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KAIBA ATTACKS
The tall boy with dark brown hair and gloomy blue eyes looked down at his opponent, a short but confident boy, blonde hair dropping from his forehead and red-black spiked hair matching his brown eyes.
“Yugi…this match shall be another struggle in our countless battles. This time, I shall defeat you…” The tall, darkened boy muttered.
As though he heard it perfectly, his opponent answered, “Indeed, Kaiba. But I think I will be the one to win. I’ve defeated you many times before, and I shall do it again.”
“We’ll see…” Kaiba replied coldly.
“These two boys are the top class duelists of Japan! They will be competing for the right to be representative in the World Nations Tournament. Will the winner be the Almighty, Motou Yugi? Or will it be the Draconic, Kaiba Seto? Let The Shadow Game begin!” The silvery hair man, wearing a red suit, exclaimed with happiness and a hint of seriousness.
Yugi and Kaiba drew their first 5 cards and yelled, “DUEL” to signify the start.
Seto drew his card and smirked. “I’ll put Saggi the Evil Clown in defense mode. I’ll add this Magic/Trap card down as a second defense. My turn ends!”
Kaiba's Blue coat fluttered in the wind as a black and yellow suited Clown pulled itself up from the ground, cackling.
Saggi the Evil Clown- 600/1500
Kaiba - 4000
Yugi - 4000
Yugi drew his sixth card. He thought to himself, “The facedown card, it’s definitely Crush Card…I will regret attacking if it is…” He chose a card from his hand. “Curse of Dragon in attack mode! Now my dragon will attack your clown!”
Curse of Dragon-2000/1500
“Hell Flames!” The golden wyrm inhaled deeply and blew out a wave of scalding hot flames. The flames burned Saggi’s suit up but the clown cackled maniacally as he shot a sphere of darkness at Curse of Dragon. “Demon Clown’s Light!”
“What? Saggi, the Dark Clown can’t attack in defense mode!” Yugi yelled out.
“True…Saggi the Dark Clown can’t…however; this is Saggi the Evil Clown! His effect destroys Monsters that have an attack higher than his defense when attacked but he stays alive on the field and you take damage equal to the difference!” Kaiba smirked at Yugi.
The Sphere hit the golden dragon and it roared in pain as it imploded. Blood splattered upon the Yugi's dark blue sleeveless shirt and black pants. Saggi cackled even more and danced around like a monkey. Yugi growled at the clown then chose another card.
“I’ll set one card face-down and end my turn!”
Yugi-3500
Kaiba-4000
Kaiba drew is card and didn’t even look at it before summoning. “Go, my Enraged Battle Ox! And with it I’ll flip, this card up! Behold the power of, Repeat Action! Its magic will repeat the last action I did during this turn, which means I summon another Enraged Battle Ox!”
Yugi’s eyes widened as two Minotaur dug up from the ground and held their axes tightly. They grunted and snorted then attacked Yugi. The face down card flipped upward revealing a trap card. The humanoid Oxen were confused and smashed into a mirror both seemingly dying of a concussion.
“That’s the power of Mirror Force, Kaiba!” Yugi chuckled.
“Do you seriously think a pair of Minotaur ramming into a mirror and dying is funny, Yugi? The turn ends now” Kaiba said with a serious look on his face.
Yugi drew his card and smirked. “I’ll set this monster into Defense mode and end my turn.” A face-down card appeared on the ground.
Kaiba drew his card. “There’s something strange about Yugi…” he thought to himself and chose 2 cards.
Bakura, Jonouchi, Honda and Anzu looked on as the two duelists continued. Anzu seemed worried about the mentality of the duelists dueling. She’d noticed that the Duels became bloodier ever since Kaiba upgraded to new technology he figured from the power of the Millennium Items.
Jonouchi cheered for his friend, “Go Yugi! Kick his ass!”
Honda yelled with Jonouchi, “Great job, Yugi! Get him!”
Anzu looked back at Bakura who seemed strange again. She wondered if the other Bakura had taken over again. Bakura looked back at her; his greenish blue eyes were different in a reddish shade. He also had the look of a psychopathic murderer. Anzu shivered and turned back to the battle and Bakura did the same.
“Spear Dragon summoned! Dragon Spear!”
The Blue Dragon flew down from the clouds and stabbed right through Yugi’s monster with its Sword-like snout. The green-armored knight, Celtic Guardian grunted in pain as blood dripped from the gap in his stomach, and it dripped from his mouth as he fell down dead, spreading on the ground.
Yugi- 2800
Kaiba- 4000
Yugi growled and drew his card and threw it out to the field.
“Eat this! Let’s go, Dark Magician Girl!”
The blonde girl with green eyes giggled as she twirled her staff. Her Black and Red armor shone on her purple shirt and red skirt. Yugi pointed towards Spear Dragon and yelled, “Murky Burning!”
Dark Magician Girl-2000/1700 – Gains 300 points per Dark Magician or Magician of Black Chaos in each player’s graveyard
Dark Magician Girl charged at the blue dragon and the tip of her staff glew bright, sky blue. She slammed the dragon in the head with the rod and magic flew around the dragon. It screamed in pain as it dissolved into dust. Yugi chose another card, “One card facedown and end turn.”
“Great…That’s the Yugi I know…” Kaiba smirked as he drew his card. “I End my Turn.”
Yugi Drew his card and threw it out immediately. “Go, Magician’s Valkyrie! Attack, Saggi, with Shiny Burning!”
A blonde girl who seemed no younger than Dark Magician Girl lunged forward at Saggi and threw her staff, sharp end forward, at the maniacal demon clown. The clown grunted and grabbed the staff, and the young girl seemed to freak out. The Clown Cackled like a psychopath and threw the girl’s staff back at her, impaling her. Blood dripped from her chest as the staff stuck in and she dropped to the ground.
“What was that for, Yugi? Are you becoming an idiot?” Kaiba looked puzzled at Yugi.
“You’ll see, Kaiba! I’ll show you, my power…” Yugi replied smiling.
Yugi- 2700
Kaiba- 3900
Kaiba drew his card. “I’ll summon, Sword Stalker, the Bringer of Vengeance! Now Attack the Magician Girl with Vengeance Strike!”
The Black knight looked at his fallen allies and tears of sadness appeared under his eyes. He howled in sadness and raised his sword, red cape flurrying in the wind, lunging at Dark Magician Girl.
Sword Stalker, Bringer of Vengeance- 2000/1700- Gains 400 ATK per monster in owner’s graveyard
Yugi smirked and flipped his face-down card. “Say Hello to Magical Hats!”
The Magician Girl laughed as she pulled 3 Hats from behind her. She threw them down and dived into one of them as they spun around flashing and changing places. Yugi dropped a card into one of the hats as they spun.
“Damn you!” The Swords Stalker yelled as he narrowly missed the Magician Girl. Yugi jumped in surprise when the Knight said this. He looked at Kaiba quickly who was smirking.
“What’s wrong Yugi? You didn’t know this was a Shadow Game? If not, you didn’t pay much attention to Pegasus at the beginning.” Kaiba stated calmly.
Yugi growled and Kaiba grunted. “It’s your turn, Yugi.”
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Please give suggestions as to what to fix.