what do u think of my deck?

[Sephiroth08]

i was wondering if anyone can help me or give me some tips on my deck?

monsters
1x twin-headed wolf
1x spirit reaper
1x barrel dragon
1x opticlops
2x la jinn
1x dark elf
1x goblin king
1x giant orc
1x second goblin
1x goblin king
1x summoned skull
1x double coston
1x witch's apprentice
1x beast of talwar
1x winged minion
1x dark magician
1x despair from the dark
1x invader of darkness
1x reb eyes b. dragon
1x kisetai
1x d.d. trainer
1x relinquished

traps
1x shift
1x bark of the dark ruler
1x zero gravity
1x torretial tribute
1x call of the haunted
2x dust tornado
1x spirit barrier
1x soul resurrection
1xa hero emerges
1x waboku
1x sakuretsu armor
1x robbin goblin

magic
1x mystic plasma zone
1x dark magic attack
1x hammer shot
1x black illusion ritual
3x mystical space typhoon
1x reload
1x creature swap
1xbig bang shot
1x card destruction
1x soul exchange
1x nitro unit
1x heavy storm
1x premature burial
so can anyone help me?

[MikeGmCb]

i was wondering if anyone can help me or give me some tips on my deck?

monsters
1x twin-headed wolf
1x spirit reaper
1x barrel dragon
1x opticlops
2x la jinn
1x dark elf
1x goblin king
1x giant orc
1x second goblin
1x goblin king
1x summoned skull
1x double coston
1x witch's apprentice
1x beast of talwar
1x winged minion
1x dark magician
1x despair from the dark
1x invader of darkness
1x reb eyes b. dragon
1x kisetai
1x d.d. trainer
1x relinquished

traps
1x shift
1x bark of the dark ruler
1x zero gravity
1x torretial tribute
1x call of the haunted
2x dust tornado
1x spirit barrier
1x soul resurrection
1xa hero emerges
1x waboku
1x sakuretsu armor
1x robbin goblin

magic
1x mystic plasma zone
1x dark magic attack
1x hammer shot
1x black illusion ritual
3x mystical space typhoon
1x reload
1x creature swap
1xbig bang shot
1x card destruction
1x soul exchange
1x nitro unit
1x heavy storm
1x premature burial
so can anyone help me?

-1 Summoned Skull
-1 Red-Eyes
-1 Soul Exchange
-1 Dark Magician
-1 Dark Magic Attack
-1 Bark of the Dark Ruler
-1 Relinquished
-1 Dark Magic Ritual
-1 Twin-Headed Wolf
-1 A Hero Emerges
-1 Soul Ressurection
-1 Shift
-2 Mysticl Space Typhoon (It's not neccessary)
-1 Zero Gravity
-1 Kietsai

Drop it some more to 40 and add these:|

1x Dark Necrofear
1x Pot of Greed
1x Graceful Charity
1x Jinzo
1x Monster Reborn (If you're playing traditional, ADD THIS!)

If you can run it that way... That Would be a good Fiend-Deck. Or you could try taking a lot out and Dark 1Worlding it.


Also:
-Keep Cap At 40, It's Almost Insane Not To
-Read the Stickies for Advice


Sorry if i couldnt give a lot of advice, its just so spread out and applied with no tactics, but thats just me. It's more of an old school powerhouse deck to me.

[KingZombie]

make the deck have around 40 cards. Too much is hard to draw the right cards.
-relinquished

[Sephiroth08]

thnax for ur help ill keep that in mind i just cut it down to 45