phoenix in the making needs work pls help

[robert84]

i am going to try this in the regionals tomorrow not sure how it should do so any suggestions on what to take out or put in would be very appreciated

MONSTERS
Sacred Phoenix
cyber dragon x2
Mobius the frost Monarch

cyber jar
cyber stein
drillroid
dd warrior lady
dd assailant x2
mystic swordsman lv2
don zaloog
exiled force
chiron the mage
spirit reaper x2
hand of nephthys x2
breaker the magical warrior

SPELLS
giant trunade
dark hole
smashing ground x2
creature swap
premature burial
brain control
pot of avarice
heavy storm
enemy controller x2
soul exchange
sorl
book of moon
reinforcements of army
scapegoat
mst
snatch steal

TRAP
sakuretsu armor
royal decree
torrential tribute
bottomless trap hole
coth

[robert84]

pls anyone

[Yugimonz]

this deck sucks :p

use the good one

[d d survivor]

- cyber jar
-cyber stien
- chiron
+metamorphosis/another dda
+2 apprentice magician

[Jemery]

the monster limeup isnt good change it.....
get some apprentices in there like dds said and maybe a old vindictive.

[Yugimonz]

yeah i agree

plz r/f my other box in sig

[TwilightDu0]

monsters should have this to start with

nethphisis (?)
3 cyberd ragons

2 hand on nethphisis(?)
3 apprentice magician
magician of faith
cyberjar

then your own touch...
you dont need the monach because nephthisis(?) destroys spells and traps himself

and with this smale bit of help you should have the phenix on turn 2 for sure...

the only prob is if he hits a DDA the deck falls, but the cubers should make for a powerful fallback

(?) = no clue on spelling:D

[robert84]

i dont have this deck any more it didnt work well

[Yugimonz]

you should post ur new one then

also u need to get ur posts up just post on evry deck and all the cool threads in gossip

[Jordanmax]

This Deck is Ilegal fix it.

[manydeck25]

This Deck is Ilegal fix it.

it was posted over 2 years ago so take an easy

[Jordanmax]

Oh Srry guys.