My Deck:Deck Destruction/Burn

[Jadehand]

I tried to make a more original deck than my old cookie cutter warrior toolbox/chaos, so here it is! This one took a while to make (Needle Worms, Morphing Jar, and Magical Thorn were HARD to find), and it works quite well!!!

Monsters: 20

[1x] Jinzo
[1x] V-Lord
[1x] Helpoemer

[3x] Needle Worm
[2x] Don Zaloog
[2x] Spirit Reaper
[1x] Yata
[1x] Breaker
[1x] TIV
[1x] Morphing Jar
[1x] DD Warrior Lady
[1x] Sinister Serpent
[1x] Tsukuyomi
[1x] Exiled Force
[1x] Reflect Bounder
[1x] WOTBF

Spells:13

[2x] Smashing Ground
[1x] Enemy Controller
[1x] Change of Heart
[1x] Raigeki
[1x] Monster Reborn
[1x] Harpie's Feather Duster
[1x] Delinquent Duo
[1x] Pot of Greed
[1x] Mystical Space Typhoon
[1x] Swords of Revealing Light
[1x] Card Destruction
[1x] Book of Moon

Traps:8

[2x] Magical Thorn
[1x] Torrential Tribute
[1x] Ring of Destruction
[1x] Imperial Order
[1x] Mirror Force
[1x] Call of the Haunted
[1x] Robbin' Goblin

Please review and rate!!! I need help and I will return the favor!

[Catastrophe_2]

Consider The Shallow Grave and Book of the Moon to recycle Needle Worms.

Gravekeeper's Servant is a nice Magic card for this deck.

Hiro's Shadow Scout MAY work.

Chorus of Sanctuary if you REALLY want a field.

P.S. It's Robbin' GOBLIN

[Jadehand]

Thanks. Well, I do have quite a few good tributes (2 Cyber Dragons, Mobius, Zaborg, Airknight, etc.) but I'm not sure which ones really flow with this deck. Also, I'm wondering about putting Widespread Ruins/Sakus in this deck. lol hope this doesnt turn total cookie cutter. I need fixes!

[Jadehand]

Anyone else?

[busterblitz]

Seems like a good burn/deck destruction to me
I like Mirage and Forced R myself-they deplete your opponents hand REAL fast

8.5/10

[Jadehand]

Thanks...that is a good combo.

[darkeduelist]

add cyber jar, it takes 5 card out of your opponents deck
9/10 for its kind

[Jadehand]

Ok. That works too.
Anyone else?

[warriors united]

may want to try another book of moon and try some d d assailants

[T.Y.R.A.N.T]

I run a successful combo, which I call 'Morphing The Many Handed Knight'

It goes like this:

Tribute for Succabus Knight. Activate Metamorphis. Summon Dark Baltr the Terrible and whack your opponent.

Succabus Knight- LOB
Metamorphis- PGD
Dark Baltar the Terrible- DB2