My fiend deck needs you

[Ryuwrath]

Hi, this is my first post on this forum so i thought i should start with my deck.

Please tell me what u think about it and how i can improve it

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Jinzo
Lava Golem
Archfiend Soldier
Archfiend Soldier
Newdoria
Giant Orc
Zombyra
Spirit Reaper
Giant Germ
Giant germ
Giant Germ
Cyber Jar
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Dekoichi
(Please don't tell me to replace my AS's with Slate Warriors, every other forum i've been to has said it but i don't have them)

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystic Plasma Zone
Hammer Shot
Fissure
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Mirror Wall
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted

P.S Please be gentle :)

[dd_assasin1]

Hi, this is my first post on this forum so i thought i should start with my deck.

Please tell me what u think about it and how i can improve it

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Jinzo
Lava Golem
Archfiend Soldier
Archfiend Soldier
Newdoria
Giant Orc
Zombyra
Spirit Reaper
Giant Germ
Giant germ
Giant Germ
Cyber Jar
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Dekoichi
(Please don't tell me to replace my AS's with Slate Warriors, every other forum i've been to has said it but i don't have them)

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystic Plasma Zone
Hammer Shot
Fissure
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Mirror Wall
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted

P.S Please be gentle :)
dude just get 3 slates, put in 3 spirit reapers, 2 giant orcs, 3 zombires. take out those germs lol. put in night assailant i think thats feind, and put in another newdoria.

[Bodacious1]

Old deck...

Please tell me what u think about it and how i can improve it

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Jinzo
Lava Golem
Archfiend Soldier
Archfiend Soldier
Newdoria
Giant Orc
Zombyra
Spirit Reaper
Giant Germ
Giant germ
Giant Germ
Cyber Jar
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Dekoichi

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystic Plasma Zone
Hammer Shot
Fissure
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Mirror Wall
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted

Things that need getting rid of:

1. Lava Golum - it's for BURN decks when there's Gravity Bind on the field and your opponent can't attack with it. It you use this in anything else than a burn deck, this card can come back to haunt you...

2. The Giant Orc - there is a better substitute to that, i'll talk about it later...

3. Jinzo - there are EIGHT traps in this deck, why would you want to cripple yourself...

4. One of your Necrofears - two are overkill...

5. Zombrya - Again, no point, it's a WARRIOR, and i have a better substitute to it as well...

6. Fissure - there is a much better substitute...

Replacements:

For the Lava Golum, we will ad in a Dark Ruler Ha Des, for high it's effect...

For the Giant Orc and the Zombrya, we will ad in two Goblin Elite Attack Force, giving the same 4-star 2200 atk. power as the orc, but with 1500 def...

For the Jinzo and the Necrofear, we will ad in two Dark Jeroid (they are non-tribute) and they also have a very nice effect (please look it up)...

And for the Fissure, we will add in either an Enemy Controller or a Lightning Vortex...

Final Deck:

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Ruler Ha Des

Dark Jeroid x2
Archfiend Soldier x2
Newdoria
Goblin Elite Attack Force
Spirit Reaper
Giant Germ x3
Cyber Jar
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Dekoichi
(Please don't tell me to replace my AS's with Slate Warriors, every other forum i've been to has said it but i don't have them)

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystic Plasma Zone
Hammer Shot
Enemy Controller OR Lightning Vortex
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Mirror Wall
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted

Rating (Before my fixing): 7.3/10 quite capable of winning on its own, but needed a bit of tweaking

Rating (After my fixing): 8.8/10 now a solid, reliable deck

suggestions: maybe add a bit of speed... (Mystic Tomato etc...)

if you have any questions or want to contact me, you can reach me at:

bodaciousbodo@hotmail.com

[OLDMANDUELER]

Hi, this is my first post on this forum so i thought i should start with my deck.

Please tell me what u think about it and how i can improve it

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Jinzo
Lava Golem
Archfiend Soldier
Archfiend Soldier
Newdoria
Giant Orc
Zombyra
Spirit Reaper
Giant Germ
Giant germ
Giant Germ
Cyber Jar
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Dekoichi
(Please don't tell me to replace my AS's with Slate Warriors, every other forum i've been to has said it but i don't have them)

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystic Plasma Zone
Hammer Shot
Fissure
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Mirror Wall
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted

P.S Please be gentle :)
Dude, I really like the structure of your deck and used to have one that is very simular as far as traps and spells.Take a look at GREAT MAJU GARZETT, he needs only one tribute to summon and gets twice of the att. of the card sacrificed.Sacrifice Goblin Elite Attack force 2200 att. get a 4400 hundred attack, 100 less than Blue eyes white dragon and a lot easier to get on the field.I would drop GIANT GERM add 3 GMJ and maybe a few more high attack level 4 monsters like Zombrya. Jinzo is always a good card to have and I would keep it.Ultimate Offering is a great card to have despite the 500 life points it cost ,esp. at the begining of a match.Hope you will give me feedback on my humble opion of these changes. OLDMANDUELER

[5610]

Only fix I can see is taking out Lava Golem for a Ha Des.

And maybe consider Return from the Different Dimension.

[Ryuwrath]

Thanks for the tips, i've now changed my Lava Golem for a Dark Ruler and im trying to get a hold of a Dimension Fusion

[akiracage]

Monsters 18

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Jinzo
Dark Ruler Ha Des

Archfiend Soldier
Archfiend Soldier
Newdoria
(3rd Archfiend Soldier or 2nd Newdoria)
Slate Warrior
Slate Warrior
Giant Germ
Giant germ
Giant Germ
Breaker The Magical Warrior
Kuriboh (saved me so often i love it)
Sangan
DD Warrior Lady
Dekoichi

Spells 14

Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
Creature Swap
Dimension Fusion
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps 8

Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Sakuretsu Armour
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Call of the Haunted



Looks good
Fixes in the Quote
Happy Dueling!
-Toonbakuraryou

[SilentMasterX]

zombyra is not a fiend and lava has to go a dark ruler would not hurt and another arch soldier.