My Fiend Deck please r/f

[Scipio]

Total cards: 43

Tributes/High levels : x5
Dark Necrofear x2
Dark Ruler Ha Des x1
Jinzo x1
Mobius the Frost Monarch x1

Monsters/Non tributes x18
Goblin Elite Attack Force x1
Break the Magical warrior x1
spirit reaper x1
kuriboh x1
Archfiend soldier x3
cyber jar x1
Slate Warrior x1
Penguin Soldier x1
DD warrior lady x 1
night assailant x2
sangan x1
dark mimic lvl 1 x1
Exiled Force x1
mask of darkness x1
Magician of faith x1

Magic x13
Nobleman of crossout x1
mage power x1
swords of revealing light x1
premature burial x1
rush recklessly x1
fissure x1
lightning vortex x1
snatch steal x1
mystical space typhoon x1
dark hole x1
heavy storm x1
scape goat x1
giant trunade x1

traps x7
bottomless trap hole x1
magic drain x1
torrential tribute x1
sakuretsu armor x1
waboku x1
magic cylinder x1
call of the haunted x1

Please rate and fix

[Nature B0y]

Night Assailant is restricted to one per deck, so you'll have to drop one. I'd probably drop a couple of those tributes, maybe one necrofear and jinzo. Obviously, you don't have more Slate Warriors or you'd use them instead of Archfiend Soldier, right? ;)

Vortex, Trunade and Mage Power could all be replaced with Smashing Ground, but that's for you to playtest, and decide based on your playing style. If you end up topdecking much tho', you're going to be quite a bit happier with Smashing Ground, because those other cards are brutal topdecks. You should probably seriously consider replacing Waboku and Magic Cylinder with a couple more copies of sak armor.

With all those flip effect monsters your deck is begging for Tsukuyomi, or at least Book of Moon. On the other hand, all those flippers are a bit at odds with the beatdown aspects of your deck, like GEAF, Archfiend Soldier, and Slate.

I've personally had more success running Tomato Control (as opposed to beatdown) with fiends, pulling Giant Germs, Newdoria, obviously Reaper, etc, but wth, your experience may well vary from mine.

Fun looking deck. Tighten up those bad topdecks, and focus on what you want to the deck to do (beatdown vs. control), and you should be reasonably successful, IMHO.

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Total cards: 44
Monsters 22
Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Jinzo
Mobius the Frost Monarch

Giant orc
Giant orc
Breaker the Magical warrior
kuriboh
kuriboh
Archfiend soldier
Archfiend soldier
cyber jar
Slate Warrior
DD warrior lady
night assailant
sangan
Exiled Force
giant germ
giant germ
giant germ
magician of faith

Spells 14
Nobleman of crossout
swords of revealing light
premature burial
Smashing ground
Smashing ground
lightning vortex
snatch steal
mystical space typhoon
dark hole
heavystorm
scapegoat
giant trunade
nobleman of extermination
nobleman of extermination

traps 6
torrential tribute
call of the haunted
sakuretsu armor
sakuretsu armor
dust tornado
dust tornado


also consider adding deck thinners too like mystic tomatoe and friends

ratings good but now a 9/10 if built better ^_^