need help with oversized stall deck!!

[Winged Kuriboh Lv.2]

need help with deck it is far too big! rates are nice (on second thought, they aren't, cause you're gonna rate it low), but the main reason i posted was for some help, ok, onto the torture:

Tributes:
Illusionist faceless mage
Molten behemoth
Patrician of darkness

Monsters:
Aqua madoor
Amazoness chain master
Charcoal inpachi
Desrook archfiend (sorry in advance)
E-hero clayman
gravekeepers guard
golem sentry
giant soldier of stone
inpachi
island turtle
mine golem
mystical elf
nightmare penguin
old vindictive magician
opressed people
poison mummy
princess of tsurugi
royal magical library
spirit reaper
spirit of the harp
serpentine princess
the dragon dwelling in the cave
throwstone unit
white ninja
wall of illusion

spells:
back to square one
card destruction
change of heart
different dimension capsule x2
dark hole
dian keto
fengsheng mirror
graceful charity
infinite cards
impenetrable formation
inferno tempest
last will
mirage of nightmare
mass driver
monster reborn
mystical space typhoon
nobleman of extermination and crossout
reload
scapegoat
swords of concealing light
the reliable guardian
tribute to the doomed
the inexpierenced spy
wave-motion cannon (decks backbone, heart and spleen )

traps:
a fient plan
backup soldier
castle walls
dissapear
dust tornado x2
drop off
enchanted javelin
embodiment of apophis
gift of the mystical elf
jar of greed (didn't have pot )
minefield eruption (destroy mine golem, destroy enemy life points )
ninjutsu art of decoy (impenatrable wall combined with white ninja )
negate attack
raigeki break
shift
shadow spell
trap hole
ultimate offering
waboku


tis my deck list, now please thin it out, its oversized. the idea is to stall long enough for wave-motion to build up enough energy to kill the opponent. added a couple of crappy burn cards, too, so wave-motion wouldn't have to stay on the field so long. i need more cards to protect wave-motion, and i use traditional format. also, i don't have much of a collection, and don't have a whole lot of money.

[ward4]

okay lets start with traps way to many the MOST I have ever used is 8
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lets see take out Illusionist faceless mage

try for some more brute force you have enough defs

try for
18 Monsters
14 magic
8 traps
40 cards total
that is a good layout

[Dead_Pool]

Okay....I used to run a stall/burn deck (did respectably), I'll see what I can do.

3 Solar Flare Dragon
3 Stealth Bird
3 Fire Princess
2 Marie the Fallen One
3 Pikeru
2 Toon Cannon Soldier
1 Witch of the Black Forest
1 Sangan
[18]

3 Wave Motion Cannon
2 Level Limit Area B
3 Messenger of Peace
1 Pot of Greed
1 Graceful Charity
1 Painful Choice
3 Toon Table of Contents
1 Monster Reborn
1 Premature Burial
3 Spell Absorption
[19]

2 Gravity Bind
1 Ring of Destruction
[3]

Toon Cannon Soldier has the same burn effect as the original Cannon Solder, plus you can use Toon Table of Contents to get it to your hand, while TToC triggers Spell Absorption, which then triggers Fire Princess.

Use Painful Choice to dump the Maries to the graveyard to yet again trigger Fire Princess.

While I may have made it a Fire Princess burn deck, I added two more Wave Motion Cannon, with the deckthinning you have from Pot of Greed, Graceful, Painful and TToC, you should draw at least one really quick. I love Wave Motion Cannon. :)

[Winged Kuriboh Lv.2]

ok, thanks, i will try these things. :)

[SuperRyoko2k3]

Monsters 15
solar flare dragon
solar flare dragon
solar flare dragon
Stealth bird
Stealth bird
Stealth bird
cannon soldier
cannon soldier
cannon soldier
nimble momunga
nimble momunga
nimble momunga
Sinister serpent
Witch of the Black Forest
Sangan

spells 18
Level Limit Area B
Level Limit Area B
dark hole
monster reborn
mystical space typhoon
nobleman of extermination
nobleman of crossout
scapegoat
scapegoat
scapegoat
wave-motion cannon
wave-motion cannon
Messenger of Peace
Messenger of Peace
Messenger of Peace
starygoats
starygoats
starygoats
pot of greed

traps 6
gravity bind
gravity bind
Torentail tribute
Bottumless trap hole
Bottumless trap hole
Dust tornado


this is my former deck before i started and became best with burn

fixes in qoute

ratings are great like a 9/10 for a rook

deck help boost
instruction manual

pm me and ill give you it to make it much better

if you heard me this is the way i started this isnt my real decklist

[SereneShadows]

need help with deck it is far too big! rates are nice (on second thought, they aren't, cause you're gonna rate it low), but the main reason i posted was for some help, ok, onto the torture:

Tributes:
Patrician of darkness

Monsters:
Aqua madoor
Amazoness chain master
Charcoal inpachi
E-hero clayman
gravekeepers guard
golem sentry
giant soldier of stone
inpachi
island turtle
mystical elf
old vindictive magician
poison mummy
princess of tsurugi
royal magical library
spirit reaper
spirit of the harp
the dragon dwelling in the cave

spells:
card destruction
different dimension capsule x2
dark hole
dian keto
impenetrable formation
last will
mass driver
mystical space typhoon
nobleman of extermination and crossout
reload
scapegoat
swords of concealing light
the reliable guardian
wave-motion cannon (decks backbone, heart and spleen )

traps:
dust tornado x2
embodiment of apophis
negate attack
shadow spell
trap hole


tis my deck list, now please thin it out, its oversized. the idea is to stall long enough for wave-motion to build up enough energy to kill the opponent. added a couple of crappy burn cards, too, so wave-motion wouldn't have to stay on the field so long. i need more cards to protect wave-motion, and i use traditional format. also, i don't have much of a collection, and don't have a whole lot of money.

If I didn't go under 40, that should do.

Eh, I like helping out people who are new to the game. Everyone who's anyone has been through that stage, and trust me, being here will change that DRAMATICALLY.

I suggest you buy the Warrior Structure Deck for its bulk of awesome cards.

[Winged Kuriboh Lv.2]

thanks a gazilion, serene :D

[Jerry beans man13]

Here is my Burn/stall deck

Monsters:

Mask of Darkness
Kuriboh
Lava Golem(x2)
morphing jar
sangan
Injection Fairy Lily
Stealthe bird (x2)
amazoness swords woman
Horus Lv4
Horus Lv6
Horus Lv8
Exiled Force
Magician of Faith
Solar Flare Dragon (x3)

Traps:

Ojama Trio
Cease fire
Secret Barrel (x3)
dust tornado
Compulsory Evacuation Device
Sakuretsu Armor
Just Desserts
Draining sheild
Bottomless trap hole
gravity bind (x2)

spells:

Pre-Mature Burial
Wavmotion cannon (x2)
Posion of the old man
swords of revealing light
snatch steal
Mst
Book of moon
Level limit area b (x2)
scapegoat
messenger of Peace :D

[Darth Payne]

Monster:
3x Solar Flare Dragon
3x Stealth Bird
1x Sangan
1x Morphing Jar
3x Spirit Reaper


Spell:
2x Level Limit-Area B
3x Wave-Motion Cannon

Trap:
2x Gravity Bind
1x Ceasefire

You can fill in the rest yourself.