need help with my deck

[darkeduelist]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:19
bubonic vermin x3
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
reflect bounder x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
EH bubbleman x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:16
scapegoat x1
messenger of peace x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:5
destiny board x3
waboku x1
jar of greed x1

well thats it. i also hav another deck at http://www.pojo.biz/board/showthread.php?p=2837368#post2837368 if u feel like r/fing that 1 too.

[Lordofthesea]

um the final pieces are entirly useless if you don't have all five

[darkeduelist]

im gonna get it tomorrow

[darkeduelist]

hopefully...

[SereneShadows]

Umm I need to know what type of theme you're going for, it would really help. It seems a lot are Fiends, so I'll try this out:

Monsters (17)

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Dark Ruler Ha Des

Giant Orc
Giant Orc
Giant Orc
Goblin Elite
Goblin Elite (If there a Fiend..If not, try any good Fiends)
Kuriboh
Kuriboh
Kuriboh
Dark Jeroid
Dark Jeroid
Newdoria
Newdoria
Sangan

I'm kinda lazy for the spells and traps...You think of something.

[dkates]

Thanks for taking a look at my Hino-Kagu-Tsuchi deck. I can't really R/F Traditional decks very well, since I only play Advanced. Also, Sangan is Limited -- you can't have two of it in your deck. I'm sorry, but I don't think I can help you here. Oh, by the way, don't double-post -- it really ticks off the mods, and a lot of us regular users as well.

[Magician_Of_Chaos_Xx]

Ill give it a 6 1/2 out of ten it is ok just needs some fixin try to balance it with the theme...elemental bubble with that o_o;?

[darkeduelist]

thx u guys ill try 2 make it better, i was going 4 the destiny board deck...

[blacklustersoldier1]

if ur playing unbanned then u should put some chaos monsters in there

[darkeduelist]

if ur playing unbanned then u should put some chaos monsters in there
which ones would b good?

[Barone]

2/10.

I don't like traditional and the deck needs alot of work. If your running destiny board you should have 3 Destiny board and 3 of each of the words.

You get a 2 because it's a nice theme :D

[darkeduelist]

wow, best rating ive got all day lol
im gonna get the last destiny board, and i alredy hav 2 copies of each of the letters, but i thought it was too much, even tho if one dies i die...
ill add the extra copies
thx

[darkeduelist]

look on page 1 for a new deck

[DarkDeath]

You should have 3 copies of F I and N, keep 2 copies of A and L because by then, your opponent will probably already used up all of his Spell adn Trap removal.

[Mech~troid]

Ahhhh, you are going for a Destiny Board deck? I would add some more of the earlier pieces (3-f 3-i 2-n 2-a 1-l) but I really don't play traditional... you appear to have some good cards though! 5/10

[darkeduelist]

thx guys, not many ppl say nice things about this deck... ill try the 3 of the earlier letters thing, but dont u think thats a lot of cards in 1 deck? id hav 2 take out some of my protection just 2 add those, and i really dont want 2 do that

[neowater]

-Sangan (1)
-Dark mimic

+Giant Orc X2

[darkeduelist]

thx neowater i took out the sangan
the reason the dark mimic is in there is 2 help me draw
i dont think that giant orc belongs in here bcuz it isnt an attacking deck, its mostly a stall-and-hope-i-get-destiny board-soon deck :D

[zomgitsadrummer]

You need Giant Trunade if you don't have one already ;)

[darkeduelist]

thx i forgot about that i hav 1 but it means rearranging my deck agin...

[Shadow The Unborn]

it isn't 40 cards yet, and im looking for ways to improve it by adding and removing cards

monster:
bubonic vermin x2
EH bubbleman x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
newdoria x1
sangan x2
nimble momonga x3
magician of faith x1
WotBF x1
mask of darkness x3
exiled force x1
cyber jar x1
fiber jar x1
morphing jar x1
yata x1

trap:
negate attack x1
destiny board x2
waboku x1
jar of greed x1
magic cylinder x1

magic:
graceful charity x1
pot of greed x1
all f-i-n-a-l peices x1 each
dark hole x1
change of heart x1
monster reborn x1
emergency provisions x2
scapegoat x1
upstart goblin x1

well thats it, i accept all comments, tips, and constructive crititisism
go to page 2 i posted a new deck

Is this going to be modified for advance play? if so...

-1.Yata
-1.Change Of Heart
-1.Monster Reborn
-1.Graceful Charity
-1.Fiber Jar
-1.Pot Of Greed
-1.Sangan (U can only use 1)

+1.Cyber Jar
+2.Mask Of Darkness
+1.Cat of Ill Omen
+1.Premature Burial
+1.The Dark Door
+1.Swords Of Revealing Light.

Hope it helps.

[FR05T]

Yata Is Banned
Thanx

[darkeduelist]

i play in a tourney at my local mall every sunday, so i dont play advanced
i also posted a modified version on this page did u see it?

[firestarter]

Your Deck Looks Ok! Did give it a 7/10 ! Also What Format are you playing ? Cause if you are playing Advanced Format you have alot of banned cards in your deck !

[darkeduelist]

i play traditional, and thx 4 givin me a good rating firestarter. if u can and/or want to, can u tell other ppl about this page? the tourney starts in 1 hour...

[CrashLove37]

You need a theme bad. If you put Yata in, put the other Traditional staples like Raigeki, Mirror Force and HFD and such.

[MystikSwordsmanLV13]

it isn't 40 cards yet, and im looking for ways to improve it by adding and removing cards

First, I'd try playing Andvanced format. Next, go to www.yugioh-card.com and look at the limited cards. Then, ask an employ at your local card shop to see the common bin. Buy cards like: Smashing Ground, MsT, Dust Tornado, Swords of Revealing Light, ect. Finally, build a deck you like, if it's Destany Board do it, then repost a finished one.

PS: I'm not trying to be an ass, but really, it's hard to R/F a Deck thats not really a Deck yet.

[Capajoe]

First I would suggest putting this in the right forum.

[II Shinobi II]

Alright it looks like your trying to go for a traitional Destiny Bored deck. I took my list and changed it...

Monsters x17
3x Ufo Turtle
3x Mother Grizzly
3x Cat of Ill Omen
2x Maryokutai
2x A-Team: Trap Disposal Unit
1x Morphing Jar
1x Magician of Faith
1x Mask of Darkness
1x Cyber Jar

Magic x13
3x Messenger of Peace
3x Reload
1x Pot of Greed
1x Graceful Cariity
1x Delinquint Duo
1x Spirit Message "I"
1x Spirit Message "N"
1x Spirit Message "A"
1x Spirit Message "L"

Trap x10
3x solumn judgement
3x wabaku
3x Destiny Board
1x Imperial Order

You already R/F'ed my Destiny Board Deck so I dont need to explain it again do I?

[AstaX]

well if its fiends then try 2-3 rigeki breaks becuz it cuase u to dicard the fiends to summon dark necofear.....

[Shadow Penguin]

Thanks for r/fing my deck, but I can't really rate traditional...You can only use one sangan.

[Tormented Magic]

I think you should add a Dark Ruler If you go on toy wiz.com you can get a japanese Mirror Force for $12.00
Hopes this helps :cool:

[Puit]

Your deck needs a theme quite badly. Fyi, I think destiny board stinks unless you can protect it, and this leaves you with 5 or 6 can't remember, lol, spaces free in your deck. I find that an okay first deck to try to pursue porbably beat down. Once you get more cards, you can start on other decks with better themes. Sorry I couldn't be too much help because kind of don't know what your are going for.

[darkeduelist]

look on page 1 for a new deck

[Cloudpaul]

Not too fond of the Destiny Board cards, but if you are running them, might I advise you get Magic Reflectors? They can be handy for that kind of thing.

[darkeduelist]

ive never even heard of that card... shows how much i know :D

[Cloudpaul]

Magic Reflector allows you to put a token on a face-up magic or trap card (like destiny board) When your opponent tries to destroy the card (Heavy Storm, Mystical Space Typhoon, ust Tornado), destroy the token instead, which leaves the card intact

[corbomb]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:19
bubonic vermin x3
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
reflect bounder x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
EH bubbleman x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:16
scapegoat x1
messenger of peace x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:5
destiny board x3
waboku x1
jar of greed x1

-1 Forceful Sentry (Banned)
-1 Emergency Provisions

+2 Spell-Shield Type 8 (Protect the Destiny Board pieces)

8/10

P.S. thanks for rating my deck

[darkeduelist]

thx 4 all the help guys, and ill try that magic reflector card it would b perfect
abd ur welcome 4 rating ur deck corbomb, i liked the theme :D

[DemonKing04]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:19
bubonic vermin x3
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
reflect bounder x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
EH bubbleman x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:16
scapegoat x1
messenger of peace x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:5
destiny board x3
waboku x1
jar of greed x1

-3 Bubonic Vermin
+3 Hyena (gets them out of your deck faster, less dead draws)

- Bubbleman
- Refect Bounder

+2 Giant rat Or Mystic Tomato or 1/1

because rat and tomato will thin your deck out (i know bubbleman does too but rat and tomato are less vulnerable) and you can search out the mimics and the reapers or the momongas and the hyenas

-1 Cat of Ill Omen
+1 Tsukuyomi abuse those Magicians. Abuse those Jars. :)

Hope that helps for ya. thanx for r/fing my deck

[Link2005]

retutning an r/f i would put in a tsukyomi also
thanks for r/fing my deck

[DuneriderTheWarTroll]

Personally it is very hard for me to r/f a traditional deck. There is definately an advantage with having the card drawing for destiny board. I don't think there has been a very effective Destniy Board deck with this new ban list out. I think you should double up on the I, N, A, and L though. Better chance to get em.

[Landstar 01]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:17
Mystic Tomato x3 *using something like this to thin down your deck allows you to search something with the third card, giving you some extra resources.
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:17
magic reflector x2 *these protect your spirit messages from being destroyed
scapegoat x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:6
destiny board x3
waboku x1
judgement of anubis x2 *these protect your destiny board AND your spirit messages


Fixes are in qoutes. You might want to try using Heart of the Underdog, and then fill your deck with around 25 normal monsters. It's great for thinning down your deck.

[darkeduelist]

i wouldnt use judgement of anubis bcuz its a continuous and i would hav 2 get rid of it, and i only hav 2 cards 2 do that. ill probably put in giant rat 2 grab sum of the stuff, thx 4 that. wat exactly is hyuenas effect? id like it if u told me. thx 4 all the suggestions and ur welcome 4 r/fing ur decks.

[darkeduelist]

isnt there any1 else?

[darkeduelist]

i hav a tourney tommorrow, plz r/f...

[Drop Off]

Which format are you using? Traditional? I'm getting mixed messages from these guys, some saying to take out forceful, others not.

[darkeduelist]

i play traditional, and i mite take out forceful anyway. let it b known to all that r/f me that I PLAY TRADITIONAL!!! hopefully every1 heard that.

[Shadow The Unborn]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:19
bubonic vermin x3
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
reflect bounder x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
EH bubbleman x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:16
scapegoat x1
messenger of peace x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:5
destiny board x3
waboku x1
jar of greed x1
my only suggestion is find room for 2 Cold Wave.

[darkeduelist]

why cold wave? its not very good

[TOP369456]

cold wave isnt good but it will protect ur m/t like destiny board and on my list, i want mad, i am not mad, but could you list the fixes u had in mind? i reali need all the help i can get thanks for postn on it :D

[Ryobit]

ok, i made a new deck and i think this 1 is pretty good. heres the list:

monsters:19
bubonic vermin x3
MoF x2
morphing jar x1
fiber jar x1
nimble momonga x3
cyber jar x1
reflect bounder x1
dark mimic lv1 x1
EH bubbleman x1
spirit reaper x2
dark mimic lv3 x1
a cat of ill omen x2

magic:16
scapegoat x1
messenger of peace x1
pot of greed x1
graceful charity x1
all f-i-n-a-l pieces x2 each
upstart goblin x1
emergency provisions x1
MST x1
the forceful sentry x1

trap:5
destiny board x3
waboku x1
jar of greed x1

Since your playing traditional, harpies feather duster will own destiny board.
Overall the decks not very good at all...sorry...

[darkeduelist]

wtf wayno? if u didnt like it dont post here. and thx 4 the cold wave idea, i only hav 1 tho. and where i play no one has harpies feather, except maybe 1 person, so im not really worried about it. im reporting ur post wayno.

[dark necrofear14]

Not bad 7.5/10

[Captain Obvious]

i would put in mabey some solumn judjments to protect destiny board and mabey a few more jar of greed i mean one isnt gonna do much
its on its way 6.5/10

[darkeduelist]

the only problem is that i only hav 1 lol

[goldensaiyingoku]

dont use bubbleman

[Chaos Man]

nice deck.. 7/7

[riftwarden]

i think you should update ur deck for the new banlist...by that, I'm referring to the one on page 3...I also think you should edit your first post and post the most recent deck with all of the edits/changes there...it makes it a lot more convenient. Unless this deck is for tradtional....

I have no idea on how to fix destiny board decks...
Might want to try mystic tomatos so taht you can quickly summon out the spirit reapers to avoid any damage...or avoid most damage that comes your way...

Thx for r/fing my deck

[darkeduelist]

i do play traditional, and i was thinkin about puttin mystic tomatoes in. and goldensainggoku, y not tell me y not to put bubbleman instead of just commanding me to do it? and thx 4 tellin me 2 put it on the front page, im doin that now

[Dark_Paladin_Rebby]

Interesting deck. Not very good at rating the Traditional format as I've only ever played Advanced. Urm but here goes:

Bubbleman is teh shmex. The best topdeck in the world. Ever. Period. KEep him. Maybe add another if you can afford it.

Um.. Hyena = > Bubonic Vermin

Mystic tomato and Giant Rat are your friend. IF ya add in giant rat... replace your Dark Mimic with Des Lacooda. Reusable!

You need more stall. Cards like Level Limit and Gravity Bind will help.

IMHO Good Goblin Housekeeping = > Jar of greed as it allows hand manipualtion. Let's say you draw 2 nimble at the same time as your GGHK... set 1 nimble and GGHK... then if they attack your nimble you can chain GGHK draw one card and put the nimble in your hand to the bottom of your deck, thus allowing you to special summon it which you couldn't if it were still in your hand. Also there's a good combo with emergency provisions which you already have! Think about it.

Also magic reflector will only save that one piece... if they can get rid of any the whole thing crashes. Magic Drain = > Magic Reflector. But that does mean lots of traps. Your decision.

Overall 7/10. With some of the fixes knocking about around here... it could become quite competitive.

[darkeduelist]

thx every1, my decks getting better every day thx 2 ur suggestions :D

[darkeduelist]

isnt there anypne else? ;_;

[Sun Tzu]

Umm I need to know what type of theme you're going for, it would really help. It seems a lot are Fiends, so I'll try this out:

Monsters (17)

Dark Necrofear
Dark Necrofear
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Dark Ruler Ha Des

Giant Orc
Giant Orc
Giant Orc
Goblin Elite
Goblin Elite (If there a Fiend..If not, try any good Fiends)
Kuriboh
Kuriboh
Kuriboh
Dark Jeroid
Dark Jeroid
Newdoria
Newdoria
Sangan

I'm kinda lazy for the spells and traps...You think of something.

i agree with him it would be a better deck with power and what are you going for

[darkeduelist]

thx but no thx, im goin 4 a destiny board deck. anyone else?

[darkeduelist]

im back. its been a while, but im still lookin 4 suggestions. any1 else?

[darkeduelist]

anyone there?

[Satisfaction]

1.5/10 . Sorry, not impressive. I would suggest running something less situational. In Traditional you should always got for a 40 card deck with the most impressive cards to gain card advantage. You will lose not because you might be bad, but because you are not taking advantage of the cards you can run, especially in Traditional.
Chaos Monsters would be nice.
Sorry, ;)