Please Help Me w/my deck, Just Started!

[cinci33]

I started about a week ago and I'm working on a Fire/Dark deck. I haven't seen every card in the set and I'm not 100% on the top cards out there, but anyways, here it is:

Fire: [20]
1x Gatling Skyterror
1x Astrocomet Dragon
2x Immortal Baron, Vorg
2x Explosive Fighter Ucarn
3x Rothus, the Traveler
3x Tornado Flame
4x Crimson Hammer
4x Deadly Fighter Braid Claw

Dark: [20]
1x Vampire Silphy
2x Dark Reversal
2x Ghost Touch
2x Black Feather, Shadow of Rage
2x Bone Spider
2x Bone Assassin, the Ripper
2x Bloody Squito
3x Terror Pit
4x Death Smoke

TOTAL=40

[Jo Mamma]

-Fire
4 Super Explosive Volcanodon
4 Deadly Fightter Braid Claw
4 Crimson Hammer
4 Immortal Baron, Vorg
2 Rothus, the Traveler
2 Bolshack

-Dark
4 Terror Pit
4 Death Smoke
4 Bone Assassin
4 Bloody Squnito
2 Bone Spider
2 Ghost Touch

You want to play your basic cards in 4's, key cards usually 2-3's. This was just an example, would work well though because it's well-balanced.

Good luck.

[cinci33]

Ok, thanks for the advice.

[cinci33]

Yay, I pulled Scarlet Skyterror today, I might try and work him in.

[CFX_Regen]

Hey Cinci, thanks for rating my deck earlier. Anyway, I really like Red/Black (I wonder why? =P)

I'm not too sure that I like your choices on your beefy creatures. Only thing I'm fond of is Gattling Skyterror, which is still WAY too hard to pull out.

Even with the effect, Vampire Silphy is not that great.

Best advice I can give is make it look exactly like mine. XD

j/k

Lose:
2x Bone Spider
2x Ghost Touch
2x Black Feather
2x Dark Reversal
1x Astrocomet Dragon
1x Vampire Silphy

Add:
1x Bolshack Dragon
2x Bloody Squito
1x Death Smoke
1x Tornado Flame
1x Immortal Baron, Vorg
3x Artisan Piscora (They're so good, test them...rawr)
1x Bone Assasin, the Ripper.

Good Luck.

[cinci33]

I currently don't own any Bolshac's and I will take out the Black Feather's, I was just playtesting them.