Someone has to check this out now. PLZ

[Defenseless]

OK still working out the lumps but here is what i narrowed the deck down to after the help.

23 Forests

1 Penumbra Wurm
1 Symbiotic Wurm
2 Beast of Burden
2 Thicket Elemental
2 Rhox
2 Silvos, Rogue Elemental
2 Forgotten Ancient
2 Mongrel Pack
2 Verdent Force
2 Seedborn Muse
4 Llanowar Elves
2 Fyndhorn Elves
(24 Creatures)

2 Exoskeletal Armor
2 Pattern of Rebirth
4 Rancor
4 Reclaim
4 Tangle
2 Hunting Pack
2 Crush of Wurms
2 Overrun
(22 Others)

Ok 69 cards unless I can take out 6 cards then Ill take out 3 lands to make it a 60 card deck.

Oh sideboard

4 Naturlize (When I know Im facing a Art, Enchan deck)
4 Fog (If I have to face a crazy quick creature deck)
2 Tsunami (Hate those counter decks)
2 Whirlwind ( Hate those flying decks)

Any help?

[Defenseless]

Keep forgetting to say that is a multiplayer deck.

[SaneHuman]

It lacks focus...what you need to do is playtest the deck excessively, see which cards work and don't work and it's stregnth against your metagame. Then, build off that, getting more multiples of the cards that do work. This should focus the deck to be less scattered and random. btw: i love verdant force in multiplayer too :p

[x0xRedEyesx0x]

They are all just big and expensive creatures...I agree that it does really need focus. Get some cheaper creatures, and cut down on the big ones. It's not always brute strength that wins the game...this ain't Yu-Gi-Oh...

[diablomaster101]

Get some little beating monsters, basking rootwalla's etc.