My plans for my DM deck

[Makuku]

Okay, so, since half these cards aren't released in the TCG, I designed this deck using the OCG cards. This is what I'm trying to make out of my Dark Magician deck once card release permits. Any fixing is appreciated, and if I got any names wrong lemme know. n.n

Total Deck:41

Monsters:18

Black Magician
Black Magician
Black Magician Girl
Black Magician of Chaos
Chaos Soldier-Messanger of Creation

Skilled Black Magician
Skilled Black Magician
Skilled Black Magician
Saint Magician
Saint Magician
Killer Snake
Cyber Pod
Magic Warrior-Breaker
Different Dimensional Warrior Lady
Critter
Magician Valkyria
Magician Valkyria

Spells:15
Lightning Vortex
Premature Burial
Tempest
Black Magic
Jar of Greed
Angel's Gift
Revealing swords of Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Dimension Magic
Dimension Magic
Monster Reincarnation
Sage's Stone
Smashing Ground
Curtain of Black Magic
Enemy Controller

Traps:8
Holy Barrier-Mirror Force
Magic Cylinder
Ring of Destruction
Cry of the living dead
Waboku
Torrential Tribute
Solemn wishes
Magic Jammer

[Astrael]

What exactly does your Black Magician Girl do? Ditch her and use something that will help you win. BMG is only really any good in multiples along with Sage's Stone. Since this appears to be a chaos variant, Chaos Sorcerer might be right up your alley.

And Bell of Destruction isn't a real card name. It's Destruction Ring. Those bad game translations cause more trouble than they are worth.

[Makuku]

What exactly does your Black Magician Girl do? Ditch her and use something that will help you win. BMG is only really any good in multiples along with Sage's Stone. Since this appears to be a chaos variant, Chaos Sorcerer might be right up your alley.

And Bell of Destruction isn't a real card name. It's Destruction Ring. Those bad game translations cause more trouble than they are worth.
Eh, I left Sage's Stone off the list accidently when I copied it. And, this is not just a Chaos deck ><; I only have Chaos Soldier in there cause this is more a Yugi type DM deck. And I'm not going to add in Chaos Sorceror.. for that I can just run a TCG Chaos deck.

[TobiasX]

Monsters

3x Dark Magician
1x Dark Magician Girl
1x Dark Magician of Chaos
1x Chaos Soldier - Messenger of Creation

I'm assuming you missed 1 Dark Magician off your list ^_^

-2 Magician's Valkyria (maybe keep, if you really want a Yami/Yugi deck)
+2 Tenacious Old Magicians (annoying)

Magics

-1 Sage Stone (only 1, and too situational)
-1 Dark Magic Curtain (too high a cost)
+1 Dark Magic Attack (its a DM deck)
+1 Smashing Ground (need more monster destruction)
+1 Enemy Controller (combo with Dimension Magic, more Counters for SDM)
+2 Baptism of Light and Darkness (help get DMoC out quicker)

Traps
-1 Magic Cylinder (unless you want a Yami/Yugi deck)
+1 Seven Tools of the Bandit (help stop traps, as your not using Heirophant of Black Magic)

Final Deck List

Monsters: 18
3x Dark Magician
1x Dark Magician Girl
1x Dark Magician of Chaos
1x Chaos Soldier - Messenger of Creation
3x Skilled Dark Magician
2x Saint Magician
2x Tenacious Old Magician
1x Snake
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
1x Breaker
1x Cyber Jar
1x Sangan

Magics: 18
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Heavy Storm
1x Pot of Greed
1x Graceful Charity
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Monster Reincarnation
2x Smashing Ground
2x Dark Magic Attack
1x Premature Burial
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
2x Dimension Magic
2x Enemy Controller
2x Baptism of Light and Darkness

Traps: 7
1x Mirror Force
1x Ring of Destruction
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Waboku
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Magic Jammer
1x Seven Tools of the Bandit

Deck Total: 43

Cards worth considering:
Deck Destruction Virus of Death: You have at least 4, maybe 6 monsters you could use, plus a quick search with Sangan.
Scapegoats: More Quickplays, plus something to offer as a tribute for Dimension Magic.

Get back to me if you want more suggestions, good luck :)

[Astrael]

Your fix is a huge step backward in my opinion.

Why in god's name did you keep DMG if you decided Stone wasn't good enough?! And three DMs is too many. Two is fine. Magician's Valkyrie is one of the best spellcaster cards, so removing that was pretty insane as well. Baptism is a waste of space with DMoC restricted.

[Makuku]

Gonna have to agree with Astrael about losing Magician's Valkyrie.. and, I feel I have plenty of destruction with Dimension magicx2, Lightning Vortex, and a smashing. Tenacious old magician isn't worth the effect, and I lose two things that are also Chaos Fodder in losing Valkyrie, as well as the great stall lock if I have two of her.. so.. yeah. I think the ONLY thing I agree with you on is Dark Magic Curtain, that I might lose it. But late in the game, where I have little LP anyway it's not too huge a cost.

[GP: Black Chaos]

your deck is lookin great have you considered using any apprentice magicians in your deck at all? They can help keep some spell counters on breaker if you decide to use him, and they can be pretty good for some stalling if needed.

[FiendLord2261]

Cool deck. Have you tried the ritual w/Painful Choice. Don't know if Painful's banned in Japan...

[BlackLusterMagician]

Im no expert in OCG but with 3 DM's in your deck and even with Snake, Magic Jammer isnt going to be worth it due to bad hand management, so ditch that. Also take out Solemn Wishes, i understand it works well with Curtain but its just way to easy to destroy so you'll just be wasting a card, ditch that. And about Tenacious Old Magician, that card actually works very well if you combo it with Apprentice Magicians, apprentice searches it out after your opponent destoys it, on your turn flip it(unless it got destoyed the turn before) to cause instant monster destruction, then tribute it for the DMG if you happen to have her in your hand. Either way your opponent would still lose a monster since it would be too late to use Nobleman of Crossout or other removals.

Edit: btw are you Makuku from PRN?

[Makuku]

Im no expert in OCG but with 3 DM's in your deck and even with Snake, Magic Jammer isnt going to be worth it due to bad hand management, so ditch that. Also take out Solemn Wishes, i understand it works well with Curtain but its just way to easy to destroy so you'll just be wasting a card, ditch that. And about Tenacious Old Magician, that card actually works very well if you combo it with Apprentice Magicians, apprentice searches it out after your opponent destoys it, on your turn flip it(unless it got destoyed the turn before) to cause instant monster destruction, then tribute it for the DMG if you happen to have her in your hand. Either way your opponent would still lose a monster since it would be too late to use Nobleman of Crossout or other removals.

Edit: btw are you Makuku from PRN?
Yes, I am that same one. And, I don't like the whole Apprentice Magician thing, it's way too cookie cutter for me. Now, who is this from PRN then? O_o